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OMGGGG xD

u're killing me woman xD

u gottta update as soon as u can, really!!! =D

Very nice ;) Can't wait to read the next chapter!!

Oh you are too cruel. He finally kisses her and you leave it at that?! Get back here! Please? Pretty please? With sugar, whipped cream, and a cherry?

Grrrrr!!! Loved Lucius' monologue, but didn't you forget something? Like the next 1000 words?

Only thirteen weeks asleep? Lucius got over his stubbornness pretty fast, didn't he? The comment about Draco and Lucius' roles being reversed was good and brings up the issue of family roles getting torn to shreds throughout the course of events. Draco actually seemed very mature in this chapter.

I really hope you update soon, but you already update very regularly, so I suppose I oughtn't complain too much. Thanks for the chapter!

Okay, although this is actually a huge cliffhanger it only feels like a little one. This is a Hermione/Lucius fic after all, so if she doesn't wake up it would mean that she's destined for somebody else. AND I DON'T BELIVE THAT.

He has to drink to get the courage to kiss her? Men, I tell you! They are so predictable in most ways! What you wrote about the sniget was just beautiful. Where is it from, or isn't it a "real" citation? I found it very moving and fitting for the occasion. I guess that Hermione will be very much like the bird... Flying away at first, but coming back when she realises that freedom doesn't always mean happiness, too...

Nice update!!!

lucius is such a whiny sap in this fic. i prefer him a bit more mean. still i like this. i enjoy the angst. the writing is good. and i always read a new chapter as soon as i see it is available. i look forward to the results of that kiss.

Just know that both of your stories are the best !!!! Poor Lucius even if he was being selfish, he has his reasons for it. Haha at the end of this chapter you have me bouncing around in my seat thinking of what could happen for them both !!!! Also I'm sorry to hear about your health. I hope the docs are doing everything they can to get you well again. Best of luck with that. Other then that awesome stories so far !!!!

Oh he did it!! I hope she wakes up xxxx

Beautifully written

I so love this story and I cant wait for the update!

*kicks rocks* mean evil cliffies! Was great but still....*pouts...even with a smile* love the update!!! Have you been to a neurologist? Or even had your brainwaves looked at while you were sleeping? The brain does marvelous things while we are sleeping and that might give you an answer...I should know as I study anatomy and neurology from time to time (I have no desire to actually work in that field, it just fascinates me). Hope you get better....have you tried Topemax?