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by chenzo412

schedule October 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am glad he waited to break up with her before making love to hermione. By the way don't let my user name fool you. I made it up after reading book 7, after discovering harry potter fanfiction and now my favorite character is hermione with about anybody. BUT mainly with hermione. After reading the books, i think jk should have paired hermione with harry.

Now I can't wait, I just hope ginny isn't pregnant, hermione is destinted to have his baby. (please......=).
schedule October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow i gald he told her and got rid of ginny .. but i would be funny is ginny was pg but with someone else baby ... please please update soon ... later for now

angel
person tommye
schedule October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow. haha. harry moves fast doesn't he. but i loved it.

i can't wait to read more
please update very soon
schedule October 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow that was awsome .. i hope ginny and harry breack up soon and that giny is not pg .. please please update soon .. later for now

angel
schedule October 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I so can't wait for more. I can't wait for it the truth to come out. I am enjoying your story. Keep writting.
person gweasley
schedule October 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I don't know if it was another oops but the end of the chapter ends in the middle of a word. Besides that good job please update Fast. I can't wait till he relises what he needs to.
person gweasley
schedule October 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
is there a reason you posted the same chapter twice???
person tommye
schedule October 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was a great start to a great story. I cant wait for the bit where Harry and Hermione finally get together.

Can't wait to read more
Please update very soon
person lily69
schedule October 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, great story so far! I like that it isn't a typical story line. I'm looking forward to reading more!

I wonder what mayhem would ensue if he got Ginny pregnant before he made his move with Hermione and then found out only after he had already impregnated Hermione! Hmmm... However you unravel this story, I am certain I will enjoy it!