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by chenzo412

person tommye
schedule October 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love it so far. Cant wait to see what happens once Ginny finds out Hermione is pregnant.

cant wait to read more
please update very soon
schedule October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
All I can say is that you did it again. I can't wait to see Ginny's reaction to hearing about hermione's condition. Oh that's going to be fun to watch. Until next time. I loved the whole chapter.
schedule October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Do you have this on anyother webpage. Do you want a banner for you story. I would use images from the movies. Let me know.
schedule October 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am sorry I didn't review any sooner. I have been busy. You have past my exceptations of this story. The way he made love to her while she was asleep "dreaming". That was so beautiful. And she thinks that they where together only one time. I can't wait for more. I was afaid I wasn't going to "still" enjoy this story. Now I have no fears. I am still enjoying this story so. Can't wait for more. Please allow the gods to bless harry and hermione "our true love couple" with a child and not harry and ginny "NOT NOT our true love couple". As the first prophcesy says "Powers he knows not", which is understand to be LOVE!!!!!!

Update soon please.

Don't make me beg you. =)
person dougal74
schedule October 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A good start. I shall review indepth once I have caught up with your story.
person dougal74
schedule October 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good second chapter.
person tommye
schedule October 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is going great so far. Carry on uploading.

Cant wait to read more.

Please update very soon.
person Mishka
schedule October 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, such a lovely contrast to when he and Ginny had sex. Rock on. I was thinking it would be such a funny kick in the arse to find out that Ginny was infertile though, and that Hermione was very very fertile XD. I hope Mione's pregnant. That would be something very nice for Harry to come home to. Though when Ron mentioned that Ginny was going out for the night I had the immediate thought that she'd be getting drunk and laid and winding up pregnant with someone else's child (which would be so shameful if it came out with all the prophecy and expectations around), but that is ruined by my hopes for her infertility. So I guess I'll have to wait and see what you do. Though I was wondering why Harry had to go on this trip if he doesn't need to find the Horcruxes--is this just a catch all if Ginny isn't pregnant?
schedule October 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It was diffantly a moving moment. I hope we get to see more before he leaves. Can he take her with him???? Let me know =)

OH and it was moving to see ron, luna, harry and hermione as they sad goodbye after their get-together.
schedule October 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think you are moving to slow with them, but it would be a beautiful moment if they made love the night before he leaves. Is he still leaving with Ginny? He is being thick headed towards the new prophecy.