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December 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. It's intriguing. Please keep writing? =D
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October 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi Jessy! I noticed you have written a story! I must say, I was flattered to see that you were using my claim spell in it. That was great, I really enjoyed that! It made me feel proud, that someone likes something I did so much that they decide to use it themselves.
Just a little comment, you should space the dialogue out a bit. It is common to skip a line whenever a different person starts to talk; it makes the story easier to read.
Just a little comment, you should space the dialogue out a bit. It is common to skip a line whenever a different person starts to talk; it makes the story easier to read.