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for The Debt

by Daktalakpak

schedule May 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
it happen with teenage girls. *nods wisely.
person anniea
schedule October 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh you are so cruel!!!!!!!!!! i want more!, next time ur writing a sexual scene try "addicted" by saving abel, "animals" by nickleback or even, "get stoned" by hinder. they really inspire me to write. update soon *kisses*
schedule October 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg. nice and just wow!
schedule October 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 7!!! Why is Draco molesting Harry?
schedule October 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 6!!!
schedule October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
liked it!
schedule October 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
mm... yes... do... tie them up soon that is!
Well it'll be interesting to see where you go from this... that's for sure...
Looking forward to an update soon!
Stef
schedule October 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love the chapter..story seems interesting
schedule October 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
but thats how i like it! out of control! hahhahah.
schedule October 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 5!!! This was part of the plan? What plan? Sooo need more!!!