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October 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I was thrilled to see you back and I hope your son is doing well. I am terrified for poor Hermione and I can wait to see what Scorpius and Rose get up to next. The scene between Harry and Draco was great and very realistic. Can't wait for more the cliffie you lest us with is killing me. Well done!!!
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September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow! lots going on here! well they finally got their feelings out in the open (draco and hermoine) they are starting to make progess! now i am even more sure that lucius is the span of satan! :[ well i do hope that they give him back to askaban and that he rot there. well scoripos is quick and i do hope that hermione is okay but i have a bad feeling. i do hope that the next chapter is coming soon! smart house elf, to turn her into a cat like that! :)
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September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am enjoying this. I love that Rose is already an animagus.
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September 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow I am so glad I found this story again. I love the violence of it all which in turn makes it very realsitic, don't change a thing. I hope you are an author that updates often. I hate to be on the edge of my seat for to long. Your writing is great and the story really has a great pace going. Looking forward to more. Well done!!!!
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September 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Lots of action....and from what I can tell, Hermione's still captured, right? Hopefully, they'll find her before too much bad happens to her. Great chapter! Update soon, ok? :D
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September 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm enjoying this story.
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September 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
well this is going to be good!!! hermione is late boy i think rose got some of her dad because she is late just like ron. :) well it will be fun to see i cant wait to see what happens! i love that scorpo told his granddad what he taught. :) he is much more like draco-yeah! so do update soon!! :)
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September 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Cool story. The drama just grips you in.
I can't believe I haven't read this before if you're re-posting it now, because I just can't wait for the future chapters! *drool*
The graveyard scene just squicked me right out to the next chapter because I couldn't stand the gore and the tragedy that something so awful would happen to Hermione right after everything she's had to endure.
I however, loved chapter 8 and 9. The courtroom scene was intense and I can only imagine you're patterning it out a little from the "You are no son of mine" pensieve scene in GoF for effect, however different the circumstances are. The relationship between Draco and Scorpius is adorable - how old is Scorpius in here anyway? When he put Lucius in his place he sounded 17 but when his Dad cuddles him and when he talks about Rose he sounds very 11 years old. But good writing in plot development and character sketching. :)
I can't believe I haven't read this before if you're re-posting it now, because I just can't wait for the future chapters! *drool*
The graveyard scene just squicked me right out to the next chapter because I couldn't stand the gore and the tragedy that something so awful would happen to Hermione right after everything she's had to endure.
I however, loved chapter 8 and 9. The courtroom scene was intense and I can only imagine you're patterning it out a little from the "You are no son of mine" pensieve scene in GoF for effect, however different the circumstances are. The relationship between Draco and Scorpius is adorable - how old is Scorpius in here anyway? When he put Lucius in his place he sounded 17 but when his Dad cuddles him and when he talks about Rose he sounds very 11 years old. But good writing in plot development and character sketching. :)
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September 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad you updated! I was wondering what else was going to happen in the story. :D
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September 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes! This is where I remember the story being! I hope you can update again. I really enjoyed this story as far as you had written it, and I am interested in how much more will happen to them both. :D