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please, please, please,finish.

This is fucking EPIC! Seriously, you're amazing and I bow down to your greatness! I had so many flippin' things to say as I was reading the chapters, but as I waited til the final one to review you can imagine I'm overwhlmed and have forgoten most of it in my state of awe. I know I was freakin' amazed by Rose, Scorpious, and Albus being animagus already. Plus, all the things they've already been through vould freakin' fill all seven novel adventures in one freakin' year! Crazy. EPIC. But Hermione has it tough. Geez, I can't even imagine... being 'used' so many times... I hope she catches a break soon. I am so insanely estatic about this story and can't wait for the next update!

great plot!! i can't wait to read more amazing chapters..

Please can Hermione endure something else, like a little happiness perhaps, just a little please!!!!!!!!!!!

Hello =)....so I read all that you have posted in one sitting. I like the plot. I like the idea of a family trying to pick up the peices, the next generation bridging the gaps between the old, previous generations stuck in a time warp of ideas and unaccepting of change. I think its very real and a great angle. My only criticism, and I mean for this to be constructive, is that I feel like I am missing something somewhere...like there is more I should know about backgrounds etc.....I like the story but for me there is just something missing...I just dont know what specifically....


Happy Writing!!
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awesome update! more, please!

Well, it least she's alive....hopefully not too badly damaged, eh? Love the way you've got the kids so involved with what's going on. I assume the next chapter will be full of action and a rescue, perhaps? :D

I can't express how thrilled I am that you are continuing this story. I was a loyal reader when you originally had started posting it and was disappointed when it had disappeared. I love the various inner stories of all the characters along with the plot. I find your style of writing great. You had mentioned that some thought it to "blunt and violent". Well I think the way you handled all that had happened in a timely way. It comes across very actioned packed and serious without getting to muddled down with to many words and making it sound to over the top. This makes for a very fast paced and interesting story. It also helps keep focus on the plot. I do have one question since I reread this. I thought Hermione had set the meeting with Draco on the 18th of December and then when Hermione gets kidnapped it suddenly the 11th of December. I try hard not to worry about dates but, since a time turner is being introduced I think its important to keep the dates straight. Thanks again for continuing this. Can't wait for the update. Well done!!!!!!!

awesome update! Loved it.

almost forgot...if she saves her mum, then erases what she did to that skank, right? ;)