errorYou must be logged in to review this story.
schedule
October 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh no!!! No no no no!!! Sooo need chapter 7!!!
schedule
September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 6!!! Poor Draco! He doesn't know and Harry is starting to forget!
schedule
August 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So I just finished reading your email and get all excited for the rest of the chapter and I popped over here and here it is! Oh such wonderful timing for me!
Anyways loved it, per usual. Damn Lucius trying to erase his memory. I greatly hope he doesn't succeed WE need ONE of them coherent at least! And poor Harry! Just what did that potion do to him huh? And did Lucius tell Draco about the potion, so he at least knows (Cause I think that's what you said but I'm just checking because that would severely suck if he didn't)
Can't wait to see where you take this!!
Oh and here's your cookies, enjoy!
Anyways loved it, per usual. Damn Lucius trying to erase his memory. I greatly hope he doesn't succeed WE need ONE of them coherent at least! And poor Harry! Just what did that potion do to him huh? And did Lucius tell Draco about the potion, so he at least knows (Cause I think that's what you said but I'm just checking because that would severely suck if he didn't)
Can't wait to see where you take this!!
Oh and here's your cookies, enjoy!
schedule
August 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh i love it!
schedule
August 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok so I was trying to figure out why this hasn't got as many hits as it should have (because seriously that first chapter was hot) and I think it's your summery. First I have to say that summery's in general suck, I mean having to sum up your whole story in a few lines is freakin tough.
But your summery is completely involving around Ginny and Lucius. The only problem is that I can't think of a better why to describe it, but maybe a little more mention of how Ginny is going to try and drag Harry away maybe?
I Dunno and maybe I'm stepping out of bounds ( Let me know if I am) but I think your a great writer and I love the start of this story so I just want more people to see it. So this is all just a thought and I hope you update soon, I'm waiting on edge to see what happens :)
If you need help with anything my e-mail is todaytoday47@hotmail.com and I would love to brainstorm with you. If not well just know that I'm waiting for the next part eagerly.
Oh and as for my fic, I've written the last scene in the next chapter and it changes to Harry's point of view and I'm freakin nervous about it. I personally really like it but then again I know where it's going but my readers don't...so I don't know maybe we could use each other to bounce off idea's ( I'm bad, trying to entice you with a preview of the next chapter but I really want your option and a new chapter of your new story.)
So anyways I'm rambling and probably not making since, but all in all I love this and can't wait and if want to muse about our fics I'm all up for it :) Either way can't wait to see the next part!!!
Write fast and I'll bake you cookies!
But your summery is completely involving around Ginny and Lucius. The only problem is that I can't think of a better why to describe it, but maybe a little more mention of how Ginny is going to try and drag Harry away maybe?
I Dunno and maybe I'm stepping out of bounds ( Let me know if I am) but I think your a great writer and I love the start of this story so I just want more people to see it. So this is all just a thought and I hope you update soon, I'm waiting on edge to see what happens :)
If you need help with anything my e-mail is todaytoday47@hotmail.com and I would love to brainstorm with you. If not well just know that I'm waiting for the next part eagerly.
Oh and as for my fic, I've written the last scene in the next chapter and it changes to Harry's point of view and I'm freakin nervous about it. I personally really like it but then again I know where it's going but my readers don't...so I don't know maybe we could use each other to bounce off idea's ( I'm bad, trying to entice you with a preview of the next chapter but I really want your option and a new chapter of your new story.)
So anyways I'm rambling and probably not making since, but all in all I love this and can't wait and if want to muse about our fics I'm all up for it :) Either way can't wait to see the next part!!!
Write fast and I'll bake you cookies!
schedule
July 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So to tell you the truth when I first spotted this story and glanced over the summery I thought "Is this in the right section?" and passed over it only to come across it again and take the time to look and see who the author was and it was you, and since I love your stories I decided to give it a try.
And damn I'm glad I did.
The first chapter...well that scene was seriously hot, very nicely written, wonderful description. and as for Chapter 2, it was great as well and by the end I'm completely nervous and excited to see what will happen next! What is Lucius going to do to Draco? and That potion better not work or Draco better find out some way to fix everything!!!! Update soon please, I'll be watching for more ;)
P.S. I loved the way your wrote Daddy Malfoy, his reaction seems so very believable. Bravo!
And damn I'm glad I did.
The first chapter...well that scene was seriously hot, very nicely written, wonderful description. and as for Chapter 2, it was great as well and by the end I'm completely nervous and excited to see what will happen next! What is Lucius going to do to Draco? and That potion better not work or Draco better find out some way to fix everything!!!! Update soon please, I'll be watching for more ;)
P.S. I loved the way your wrote Daddy Malfoy, his reaction seems so very believable. Bravo!
schedule
July 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh no!!! I sooo need chapter 3!!!