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Hurry up & fight for own way to live Harry! Yea Draco you are brave to down the powerful & bad ass Lucius in his own place. You must really care for Harry!

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I really like the way you did the dialogue between Lucius and Ginny in Chapter three. The lack of 'he said' 'she said' was something I found very appealing and I must say I'm looking forward to seeing this plot unfold (I'm slow at reading this, I do apologize!).

Sorry I'm taking so long to review this, but I was occupied New Years. I really like the start to this and the vague intensity of the opening scene. I'm excited to read on:)

Omg!!!OMG!!! I've only ready the summary of the story and already I am laughing my arse off :D Voldie slipped and fell in the tup?? OMG!! bwahahaha! Its already funny enough as a realize it was meant to be spelt " tub" but by mispelling the word and writing "tup" you are now refering to Voldie slipping into a male uncastrated sheep( a ram). The term "tup" is generally only used in Britain actually but as all these characters are british...man * wipes tears from eyes* Never would have considered Voldie as a sheep shagger but there you have it,clearly his evil knows no bounds >_<; okay, okay, I'm fine now...on to the smut...

okay soo, i've read it and its not bad. However I am wondering why Lucius didn't just do something himself instead of calling on Ginny Weasly of all people. Asking a Weasly for help?? Really?? It would have been much more in his character to try and torture some sense into Draco himself. Also the thing where Draco sees the kissing is so...over-used. I don't know its just been used so many times in various romance movies, shows, books etc. The loving couple, the misunderstanding that includes one person walking in on a completly instigated scenario, teh fight and then the making up. I mean what are even the chances of teh person walking in at EXACTLY the wrong moment and leaving before they can witness the truth? Actually come to think of it this type of situation happens ALOT in mangas and animes. So yeah, that did bother me. Maybe next time you could write in a scene where somebody else whatches the scene and then shows Draco the images in their memories or something...be a bit more creative...the smut parts were pretty good though although I would enjoy it more if you stuck with first names instead of putting in " the man". I mean why the mystery? We know who it is...using phrasing that hints at a third person in teh form of " teh man" actually causes us to distance ourselves from teh character if overused and u don't want to do that. Okay that was just my 2 cents worth. I'd like to think I have some valid points as I have a degree in lit but u can ignore me if you like :P Keep it up!!

serves the bitch right *evil maniac laughter*

Sooo need chapter 8!!! Did Draco hear any of that? So Ginny is to carry Lucius' spawn? Soooo need more!

those sneaky fuckers! ahahhahha i love it!