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July 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Congratulations on the Beta! I think it will make a huge difference and make your story something for you to be really proud of!! I will keep watching for updates.
Happy Writing!
~SG~
Happy Writing!
~SG~
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July 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
haha, i really love it! laughing all the time...seems Draco is a bit hysterical after the Azkaban...anyway can't wait to see if Hermione got his "first born" really lol
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July 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This chapter made me laugh my ass off. I love Draco's reactions to the movies and to the broom.
Awesome chatper, hun. I can't wait for your next update. =D
Keep it up!!!
Awesome chatper, hun. I can't wait for your next update. =D
Keep it up!!!
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July 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i soo totally loved the Lord of the Rings and laughed out loud with how you incorporated it into the story...i wonder what draco is going to get up to next onw that he's home alone again...hopefully there'll be some narcissa action soon and i luved the update...keep it going
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June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh wow. more pleaseeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Formatting is much better and easier to read. Im glad you took the advice as it was meant, as constructive criticism and not a flame. A beta will do wonders for your story. Its a good premise and can be a great story with some "cleaning" keep it up.
Happy Writing!
~SG~
Happy Writing!
~SG~
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June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i laughed out loud literally when draco spotted the hippogriff and was like "buttcrack" hilarious! great update...i like this cooking, painting, kind of liberal arts side of hermione...hopefully she won't be portrayed as a complete and utter bookworm in your stories...i thought it was a great update totally loved the prison break now to see what draco does with his day...i think draco should get introduced to lord of the rings...
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June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
is she gonna break him out...hermione planning a prison break would be fucking awesome!! you have me intrigued please continue
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June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Do you plan on explaining when pansy and her became friends? I was just wondering, Im curious about that one.
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June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
a very intriguing beginning, i'd like to read more about what hermione can do to prove draco's innocence, and exactly how old are they? how long has draco been in prison? why would someone frame him? where is his family? i am very interested in reading more! happy writing!!
Lady B
xoxo
Lady B
xoxo