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Love your story!!!!! XOXO :-)

I hope you update soon! I can't wait to read what happens next!

I absolutely cannot wait till you update I love this story sooo much !!! I love how fill it with sexy smut but also have a great plot to keep you going Update SOON !!!! =)

I'm so sorry to hear about the losses you have suffered recently and while I know it's hard, things will get a little easier to deal with every day. As for writing, I found it invaluable when I lost my twins, writing stories to cope with my pain is how I ended up on Fan Fiction in the first place. You don't have to continue with these stories just yet but if it helps to write anything at all, just go with it. (or whatever else it is that you do to get yourself through) I for one, will be ready to read some more of these wonderful stories when you are ready to write for them again. :)

i am in love with this fanfic. i need to read more, so hopefully the next chapter will be posted very soon.

Just spent the entire night reading through this. Pretty good. You've still got some basic Homonym and punctuation mistakes that you and your beta are missing, but it is still entertaining.

However, there are some plot questions, holes almost I need to ask about. When the Ministry came for the surprise inspection, why did they go through all of that? Why not simply have Draco cast his Derek Glamour? After all, he is pretending to be his cousin, there was no reason why he shouldn't have been visiting his Aunt. If the Ministry was fooled by the disillusionment spell the first time, why not use it again in the bedroom. Why the scream? If the ministry was fooled by the disillusionment spell, then the Glamour really should have worked. There was no reason for the whole flight from Malfoy Manor.

wow this fic is amazing!! :o)
hope you update soon!!
xoxo

ahaha, loved the LoTR bit about Dumbldoor!! :o)
I did the same thing in my fic, but with Draco thinking that edward cullen was cedric diggory!! :oP

anyway... Im off to read the rest!!

xoxo

I was with Hermione about Draco's jealousy...I mean, that was /before/ they got together. I'm glad he apologized though. Can't wait for hte next chapter! By the way, just thought I'd point out the grammar mistake -- you're writing run on sentences and need to put punctuation in between the sentences (to prevent the characters from sounding like they're speed talking with not taking any breaths in between/no pause). If you read it aloud and there is a pause, there usually is supposed to be punctuation... I really did enjoy the chapters though. =)

Cheers - GS (mlui187@LJ)

I just got caught up with your story again. Glad to see you're better.

HOLY COW - dom, dirty talking Draco is so HOT. OH GOODNESS! Boy when Hermione was detailing her guys, I was just cracking up. I'm glad she threw all of Draco's girls in his face.

I love how you ended it. NICE -