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Foolish! Oh Draco! I sooo need chapter 2!

Although the first chapter was fairly short and obviously not to canon, you have the AU/AR warning in your summary so that's good. You may want to proof your next chapter a little more carefully, or perhaps find a beta to help, because there are a few errors with puncuation and such. Having said that, it's a nice start, and the last line was intriguing. You've caught my interest. I'd like to see where you go with this. I'd like to find out why, if it isn't just an act, Draco bothered to get Harry help instead of just leaving Hermione to do it. I'm also wondering, given what Hermione screamed at Bellatrix, if Ron is dead or not. Looking forward to your next chapter, so update soon please! :)

Well, I loved it. Poor Draco will take a little while to let go and remember he don't have to be "Malfoy" any longer. Is Ron dead oe injured? Love Harry /Draco together. Please continue this. I hope you do.

Keep writing! it sounds good and I'll keep reading!