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i'm sorry someone upset you with their review. I hope you don't give up on this story or any future ones. I enjoy your writing and would hate to see you stop doing so. This chapter was a hoot!! (no owl pun intended...lol) I loved the banter between hermione, harry and lysander and then Draco's inclusion in it as well....what sound DOES an octopus make? I very much enjoyed the humor in this chapter and look forward to seeing where it leads our favorite couple who is not yet a couple at this point in the story =) Happy Writing!!!

Sorry to read that people are complaining at you in reviews. I'm enjoying everything thus far even when I notice minor errors (spelling and grammar), and even the best betas can miss things. I've read plenty of professionally published books where you'd think the editors hadn't even bothered to read it thoroughly.
So ignore the smell of matches striking and just keep writing, the best way to learn is to practise.

Cat

This story is so orignial. The angst, the emotion, so real I can hardly bear it... but then I can't wait for the next chapter. I love how different all your stories are, like in "A Wizard's Debt" the points of view are constantly shifting. YOu have an amazing talent. I can't wait to read more of your works and finished projects!

Draco is one very good son.

We used to do fried chicken in the old McDonald song - we are a mean family, huh ?

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I loved that chapter - nice and fluffy and I'm glad Hermione's name is finally getting cleared. I can't wait to see what she's got cooked up for Lucius. Knowing Hermione, it's gonna be good.

I think you're an awesome writer so whoever that flame was from tell them to go fudge themselves! btw, fudge is a favourite substitute of mine when I can't swear round sensitive ears - I had a good chuckle at that one.

ok second review this time for chapter 18. That was good. It was so damn funny that Lucius' sarcastic wit just made him look even more loopy! poor Lucius!

After that apology, it looks promising for things to maybe develop more between them. Besides, good things can happen at wedding receptions - lots of chances for dancing and closeness... and oh god I really am a soppy romantic!

I really thought Hermione's revenge was a cop-out. It was stupid, honestly.

An awesome revenge by Hermione. Mess with his mind...that was great!! Keep up the brilliant work!!

Doctor Who reference hurrah! MP for Flydale North hehee Anyway, wanted to say how much I'm loving this, I always enjoy looking out for your stories, along with Ms Figg, Snape Goddess and LaBib, you're one of the top authors that springs to mind when I look thru Potter fic. Carry on the great work hon and don't let the bastards beat you

shew, you are so quick, I find it hard to read while all these people keep bothering me about 'work' I REALLY need to get my own computer at home (hubby thinks the internet is evil, if he ONLY knew what I was reading, LOL)

So, Lucuis has apologized, hmm, didn't he tell draco that's what he was going to do, Draco told him that wasn't enough, lol.

Okay I have to go home and STUDY! I failed AGAIN!!! Stupid retarded questions make no sense and I've been doing this for over 10 yrs :(
3rd time's a charm right?

Loving your story, hopefully I'll be back next week to read more happy updates! (my punishment is no stories until I'v passed)