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I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

aaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhh i want more of the story. please update soon *kisses*

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Welcome Back!! I hope your trip was good :)

Mr and Mrs Lupin!

Dog, bowels

I loved this part, "I hear the flobberworm mating season will begin in the new year.

Hello Utopia, I finally caught up on the story. After the first three chapter I stopped reading it, for I couldn't see Moine and Lucius in it. But I guess that's what you intended. Now I know why. Ever since I got over it the story has been great really.
I like the way you portrayed Narcissa, although I used to hate her for being married to Lu. But somehow it feels natural to have her this kind and understanding. It's cool to see her dealing with female rights and finding her love with Remus and getting another baby.
And what happend to Draco? He softend up in a positive way and still kept his slytherin-traits - he finally became a man? Excellent!
Hermoine is tough and vulnerable at the same time. She suffered unspeakably awefull deeds and still kept her baby (and it is so cute and real. Loved the scene when they get kidnapped and Severus tries to shut Ly up, the baby looks at him and continues to scream! That's a baby!). And isn't Moine a heroine? I wouldn't know what to do in a situation like that. Wow!
Yeah and what about our sweet, sexy Lucius? Ha, I melted away at your portrait of him. Okay I'm biased and he acted like a complete idiot, but wouldn't you forgive him? I would. And it was worthwhile putting his stupid actions in the story, cause it just provided a fantastic basis for hilarious and witty crosstalk between the two of them. and showed how desperate he is. Oh lovely!
What I found really interesting was Harry's mate. Could you write more on him as a vampire, for Severus also seems to get into that direction?
You made me curious on this. And for Sev, oh, I wish him all the best and maybe you could find him a love too? (Okay, I confess - I'm the romantic type.)
So, to sum it up - well done girl, as usual. I really adore your stuff and please go on. Soon!

Oh, one last note: I have no idea what that negative review concerning the german spelling (???) was all about, but let me tell you as a native german journalist: Let them "fudge" off. It's all good and well written.

Can't wait for the update.
LOL, Alex

I'm getting old and forget half of everything: When I read about Moine's revenge, my neighbours thought me to have gone mad. I laughed frenetically. Well done! More of it!
LOL, Alex

Great job! I love this story. And just to let you know, I used to be a life long PC user. I just went Mac and let me tell you, I am never going back! Good luck with the computer and keep up your excellent work.

I am so glad you're back. I love the idea you came up with to alleviate Snape's physical pain. He deserves better than a loveless existence and pain.

Lucius being sought by the witches was really funny, especially since the one he truly wants won't have much to do with him. Yet. Narcissa and Remus were sweet and I loved the way all the 'boys' reacted when that b----h said her nasty little things about bloating.

I would love to see a Snape romance after Haldor changes him. Is it in the works?

*dances a little happy ... no ... dances a huge happy dance around the maypole*

You are back! You are back! So glad it was vacation and not simply being fed up with fanfiction!

Finally some hope for Severus, although unexpected. Nice. I was very worried about him. And there