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Definetely didn't go the way I expected, but I like it! Keep up the good work!

Hey, just came upon your story and read it right through in one hit. I'm very glad that I found it when I did - I have no self discipline and hate having to wait for updates! It was great that so much of it was already posted.

I've enjoyed it and will definitely check back for the last bits.

I just wanted to say that I am always full of admiration for writers who don't let their dyslexia get in the way of what they want to do - I went to uni with a girl who was quite severely dyslexic and she is now a published author - that's what betas are for, anyway. You have a good sense of style and flow and you're clear on where you want to go. Your characters are believable and well-defined.

Anyone who chooses to gripe about the odd lapse in what is basically a made-for-fun creation seriously needs to get a life. Though I noticed some errors here and there, it took very little effort to ignore them - they certainly weren't important enough to seriously disrupt the flow.

So, I'm looking forward to the next bit...

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Enjoy!

I'm really enjoying your fic, it's wonderfu. I didn't read all the notes but I caught the one that upset you. I don't know what that person said to you but he or she is an ass. I wish I had half your courage. I write fics but am to shy to post. You said you write only for you and your right. Because of your words I'm writting the a fic and I'm going to post it, I just wanted to say thanks and keep up the awesomeness :)

I like the humor you've given them, and I REALLY want to know if Haldor can help Severus? Please continue if you can? Pretty please?

I do hope you continue the story.

Hopefully, Hermione will be able to find a cure for Severus, he deserves some sort of happiness.

Do all of Hermione's friends know what she does to make a living?

....hope the plot bunnies are being gentle yet firm with your ankles.....

Alright, I would like to say that I do love this story! It is very well written, and how you've changed the characters so drastically is flowing quite nicely.
I really wanted to let you know, though, how I am reading this. Early on, during the wizards porn at the theater, I wasn't picturing Lucius. I love Dramione/Dramionaise, and just recently Lucius/Hermione. But all through the beginning, I was imagining, instead of Lucius as Max, Draco. And his Italian alter ego, Blaise Zabini. Literally, when he began speaking the language and put on the accent, calling her "Cara" it sounded seriously like the Blaise from The Family Jewels by Narcissa Black.
And I can't really picture a Lucius who doesn't know EVERY way to pleasure a woman, like the kissing and such. It just doesn't click in my mind as true to his age and experience... Like, I can understand Draco being forced to rape and hurt women as a Death Eater, and ultimately only understanding that kind of sex (dom), but not Lucius. Lucius had many years before he became a Death Eater, and we all know he didn't sex up Narcissa through torture.
Slowly though, I am trying to work Lucius into this, in my mind...
It is a great story though, and I am going to continue reading it as it is updated, I just thought it would be good for me to let you know how I am perceiving this. Oh, and also, I do plan on adding a link to this story on my blog, and quote the summary, and put your screenname. It will be at http://lovesdramione.blogspot.com . Alright, I guess thats enough for now! PS: that slash earlier on was just plain HOT! Even as quick as it was, it was still very sexy!

Can't wait for more. Hope all is well.

Chapter 20: Lupin and Narcissa have finally found a true love and now have committed themselves to each other. With a new little werewolf on the way. Poor Draco, having his all shown to everyone, even if he was only a baby at the time.

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Hello,

I love this story. LM/HG are a couple that can range from frightening and angsty to cute and down right hilarious!! Your story has a combination of the angst and hilarity that makes a great story. I hope to see more soon.