rate_review Reviews

Very nice; glad you had a chance to finish this :)

This was a wonderful story. I enjoyed reading it.

Oh this chapter made me tear up! Wonderful story so far! Great job!

that was interesting!

That was very interesting. Didn't see it coming!

Wow, I think I am sweaty from that one!

Ah wonderful ending. So glad that Severus isn't in pain anymore and that his oboe works. Loved Lysander, the octopus and the rings.

aww!! what a sweet ending

First of all I was glad to see the story back. But, uh, it seemed so sudden an ending. Why didn't you show the courtship or Lucius's developing relationship with Hermione's son for that matter? It feels rushed and something you threw away to be done with. To say you're finished is one thing to say you have finished it well is another. Given the caliber of writer you are, I expected more than this half assed attempt. Sorry if this sounds harsh, but I was really disappointed. Please give more consideration into developing this story more and I hope to read more of your stories in the future.

Lol., original idea ;)