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@ chapter seven end - OK so maybe I did get a little more M/M action there hey? I suppose that will do me! :P I don't think this story could really have much more male/male action without becoming a slash story (unless it was a side pairing - oooooo Draco and Harry!!!!!!!!!!!! Coz like Harry's Hermione's friend and Lucius is Draco's father and you know they could make an appearance towards the end of the story when everyone knows who everyone is and Lucius and Hermione intend to live happily ever after - of course presuming that is where it is going, which might not be the case.)

So yeah awesome work, going to go read chp8

@ chapter eight - Good ol' het sex. Gotta say, I didn't really think of Lucius and Hermione while reading that, there was a Italian man beneath a woman who had recently had a baby and it was really good in the sense that your writing portrayed them becoming their characters and really performing. I must say I couldn't reli put my finger on an Italian sounding accent so mostly it turned out Spanish in my mind.

Well, I look forward to more updates, you have me hooked, and I must say that is a definite feat as I don't think I've been hooked to a het story in a very, very long time!!

~gorgeousbowneyes

RE: chapter eight

*SQUEE* Holy Hornytoads--Damn, that was freaking hot! I've got goosebumps right now! LOL

Oh my, (::fans faces while grinning like the Cheshire Cat::) I love Lucius using a foreign accent and Hermione getting off on it.

::purring:: Mmmm, it was absolutely delicious how forceful he was when he ripped her negligee with a sexy predatory look all the better to pay homeage to her delectable body being offered as a sacrifice to his manly godliness.

Oh my gods, he has a god-given talent to give her a screaming orgasm with just ONE finger, and then again with TWO fingers. [He has GOT to teach my hubby that! LOL]

I love how caring he is for her well-being and asking her if she is alright. I find it very sexy how responsive she is to him and the things that he is doing to her, you know?

Mmm, talk about sexy, yummmm, I love her comment about what a beautiful alter he makes and she proceeds to worship him with her hand, and then her body as she rides him to completion a third time to the point of becoming boneless-like.

What a Man! Super, sexy, studly, yet somewhat sensitive to his lovers needs/pleasure Lucius then gently rolls them over and gives her one more fantastic orgasm before he himself has his own. F**K me! I have got to get my hubby into that ZONE!!! LOL
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From A/N at the beginning of the chapter: '... Your review reads like you

Re: chapter eight

I completely forgot to make mention of the side story of Hermione being a new mother that she is still breastfeeding.

Will we find out the circumstances behind that?
Did she conceive due to her being raped by Death Eaters?
If not, who is the father?
How old is the child, and who takes take of him?
etc.

In case I forgot to tell you, I absolutely adore your story, your character developement, and let's not forget the yummy smut too.
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Can I just say that I absolutely love this story! It's just the right amount of light but serious and oh so incredibly sensual! You've had me hooked for awhile now but I didn't realize you updated so quickly when you do update so now (hopefully) I'm back on track for a few days. So she has a child? You've kept the story mostly in Lucius' perspective, are we going to see anything on Hermione's perspective? I'm a little curious about her as well.

She's a mother! That was unexpected. Her hissing at him was pretty funny. Very nice sex scene between Lucius and Hermione, and nice ending to that chapter. The sex between Severus and Lucius was lovely, but Lucius's names for Severus made me giggle. "my onyx"? "inky soldier"? I think the chapter with Severus could use a little reminder of Lucius's experimentation on stage with the other man--I completely forgot about it and was rather confused the first time I read the Severus chapter.

So Severus knows Lucius's secret?

I think it'd be funny if Draco or Narcissa went unknowingly to watch Lucius perform.

Oh, beautiful alter-->> beautiful altar.

Chapters 7-8: Gee, I can

Holy Cow that was hot! Please add more soon

LOL, The Sev/Lucius love was satisfying...I love a bit of slash lol. great chapter doll, but wish it was me that was playing in a sleeping bag with ol' Luci!