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for Wizard's Porn

by Utopia

schedule May 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really can't wait now, that chapter 14 was an excellent cliff hanger. This is getting so interesting and I love how quickly you're updating. I wish I had the pull to do that with my other stories.
schedule May 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The spell for the stairs to avoid creaking sounds is pretty cute.
I'm surprised Hermione didn't take the Potions apprenticeship as a way to tread water while waiting for a better opportunity. At least she's have more income or at least free housing, instead of having to borrow from Harry or Kingsley. Maybe it would take Hermione too much away from Lysander?
I'm surprised also that the bookings dried up, if people were willing to pay 500 galleons for a performance, surely more people are willing to pay somewhat less for performances. I'm a huge nitpicker though.
I'm very curious about what Hermione is plotting now. It's good to see she still has some compassion for Lucius, although of course she doesn't forgive him. Will Narcissa and Draco be informed of what Lucius did?
Also, why weren't Kingsley and Harry surprised about her working at the Theatre of Porn (or whatever you called it). Did they know all along?
schedule May 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, great bit about Lysander going bonkers and the whole thing with the blanket.
Would Lysander be eligible for all the Lestrange estate? Or would it already have been dissolved at the deaths of the other Lestranges?
person Muffy
schedule May 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like the plot so far. Each turn, more and more interesting. Well done. Thanks!
person Muffy
schedule May 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very unexpected turn of events. I'm blissly baffled and looking forward to reading more as you have time. Thanks!
person Shetan
schedule May 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very enjoyable story, please update soon
schedule May 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was a great little filler chapter. So I've been wondering and wondering....we know Hermione was raped but that she chose to keep the baby (for which is applaud her btw...oh and stupid Ron, someone should transfigure him into a bug and trap him in a jar for a while....Rita Skeeter anyone? lol And yes I know she was an animagus). But will we ever find out who was the father? Or doesn't she know? And I can't wait to find out Lucius's reaction to finding out that his Juliet is Hermione. Anyway, great update and as always I can't wait for more!!
person linmo
schedule May 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
For a story start with pure smut, it turned out to be very (bitterly) sweet. I would hope it is Droca rather than Lucuise but Draco is still very young in you story so Lucuise is perfect for her.
person carha
schedule May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awwww poor Snape :(
Doing really good on this story. Looking forward to seeing more soon. Keep up the good work
schedule May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sigh, poor Snape. Yay for another very welcome chapter! Update again soon, please?