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I really like this story. Hope Hermione injures Lucius badly for what he's done, no matter his reasons for doing it.

Chapter 12: You know, you said 12 was a short chapter,

Once again I have missed the three latest chapters and could not review individually. I have been studying all morning and yesterday was the first day of the week so I had no time to spend reading :(
This weekend was nuts as it stormed it's ass off in my town and the storm drain backed up right into my driveway, garage and eventually a foot into my finished basement where my oldest child sleeps! Crazy ass weekend!
I re-sit for my exam again tomorrow, wish me luck!

Now, onto your story!! Wow, how sweet of Kinglsey to give Hermione his cottage. And Ron?? What an ASS!! Git! Idiot and all those other names you KNOW fit his character (for this story :) )
Lucius, uh-oh! He was obsessed, and now he's going to pay. I only wish Hermione would wake up BEFORE Harry and Kingsley get there. The backstory was very well done, poor Hermione. As for her decision, it isn't the baby's fault, so why should he suffer? (although MO on the matter is unless you step into her shoes, you'll never know what it's like to have to choose)
Good for her for keeping him. Lestrange is the father though huh? Ick, ew, yuck.
Harry is being as sweet as ever, but who is his 'mate'??? Do tell!
Remus & Narcissa are too cute together and kudos to Lucius for handling it so well.
Snape, well, what can one say about Snape. Snarky, greasy old bat, lol. Poor guy. Hopefully Hermione can continue to work on potions that will eventually help him.
Later for now.

Chapter 13: Oh oh, Lucius, don

Oop - did I precipitate Rodolphus LeStrange being the designated father of Hermione's baby? His birthmark is a teardrop and Lucius recognized it. I imagine any Death Eater would recognize that mark. Did Snape? If so, did he ever tell Hermione? Will Lucius? And what mark does Lucius'family generate? Yup, weave one item into a story and more loose ends appear. Writing is complicated sometimes. So I apologize in advance if this is my 'fault'.

LaBib

Um.....wow. That was seriously intense. I kind of feel bad for Lucius though. He is alone and his wife left him his son doesn't live at home and the wizarding world pretty much wants nothing to do with him. But I can't figure out what Hermione is going to do to him though. Sending him to Azkaban won't really do anything to his pride seeing as how he's been there fairly often eh? And Hermione is smart enough to know that so, I'm wondering.....just what has she got planned? And I know it's a bit of a long shot, but, maybe he could kinda sorta redeem himself just a tiny little bit by informing her that Lysander is the LeStrange heir? I'm assuming they still have property and money? If so that would certainly make it a little easier on Hermione yeah? Anyway, really great updates and I can't wait for more, so get back here and post soon!! LOL

Oh my god!! Hermione best not hurt my Lucius!

WHat a hot and intriguing story. I hope Lucius isn't going to be in too great a trouble, aside from the revenge. I liked what Hermione said a bout pitying him. He really is a lonely man if he has to resort to this to get a woman. I liked the vanilla chapter. It was sweet. (No pun intended.) Thanks for such a fun read. I hope to read more soon.

ahahaha I LOVE IT!!!

he's so stupid!!!! hahahahhaha. omg I couldn't stop laughing at his insanity induced state of kidnapping a little kid and Hermione. ahahahahaha. oh god I have tears streaming down my eyes and THEN he confesses and acts like a little kid caught with his hand in the cookie jar instead of being overly defensive Lucius Malfoy. ahahhaa. oh priceless. Thank you I needed that laugh.

You are certainly spoiling us with all these updates....please keep doing so! =) I wonder what exactly she will do to get back at Lucius. And i kind of feel bad for lucius. he was startled by her appearance and the little boy and just acted without planning it all through. Brilliant work....Keep it up!!