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by Utopia

schedule May 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Whooo so Harrys with a Vamp? How exciting! Poor little Ly, must be painful for the little chap...Wow aint used that word for years LOL. I still want Luci to come out on top, that sexy blonde chunk of man! Big birthday celebrations start tomorrow lol, cant wait! Great chapter doll, reallyt enjoyed it!
person Elay_Daily
schedule May 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a really captivating story. I like how it isn't just about sex, and how the sex was used to set up the plot. I like how you introduced the vampire as Harry's mate into the story. Is there a certain reason why you chose to name Hermione's son Lysander and have the father be Lestrange?
schedule May 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was unexpected. I like Haldor, but I'm wondering how this will affect any relationship between Lucius and Hermione in the future, if there is one that is. Wizarding society is so prejudiced. I hope things will change.
person Suzzanne
schedule May 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I find myself checking for updates to this story constantly! Its really starting to bloom into something wonderful! Keep up the good work!
schedule May 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. I like what Draco had to say to his father. Even though at that time Lucius was just as trapped as Draco, he should have done more to protect his son. I hope he learns his lesson at Hermione's hands.
person Shetan
schedule May 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is an absolutley terrific fic, Lucius is at a loss and it's time for Hermione to reveal the truth for eveyone's sake and healing. Please update soon.
person robin
schedule May 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i am enjoying this fic very much. i am a "lurker" by nature and don't review often, so when i do its only because i am struck by a story. the scenario that you have set up is fascinating, however i think that you need to be careful to stay on topic. i have read many of your fics and the better ones have a nice flowing continuity. this can be interrupted by introducing to many sub plots. not that you have already done this, but just be cautious. THIS IS NOT A FLAME!! on another note i feel sorry for Lucius. he was spooked and reacted on instinct. he doesn't deserve too much harsh treatment. i am glad you have Hermione stepping up and finally doing something about her situation. if i were her i would like revenge on Reeta skeeter more than Lucius. sorry if this cmae off bitchy i tend to write that way.
person Flowerchild
schedule May 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Really loving this. I cannot WAIT to see what happens to Lucius Malfoy. And Hermione and everything. Haldor is a new character, I really like him :)
schedule May 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was brilliant! I cannot wait for more!
person shelagh
schedule May 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm lovin Haldor. Draco is brilliant as well. Oh and as for the glass tub? Hubba hubba! And yes my Ex would have turned it into an aqaurium as well. (Shakes Head) Men!