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Uh, Hermione

Harry is a Vampires mate? Man I did not see that coming! There may have been clues but I'm too dense to get subtlties...LOL I find it little off but you are the author you can do what the hell you like!....LOL

I like the way you have woven a plot with the porn to create a wonderful story. I hang out for every chappie and can't wait til the next chapter when you continue it on. I want to see how Hermione deals with Kingsleys job offer.

Great stuff keep up the good work!

Well. Harry and a vamp eh? That's so hot. lol Another great update! And I'm glad I've given you and idea to think about....ponder away m'dear! As always I can't wait for more!

@ chapter 14

OH MY GOSH. I'm actually looking forward to this. I'm hoping it's not too angsty for Hermione/Lucius because the way this chapter ended left me almost in stitches thinking of what Hermione could get up to to get revenge.

Poor Lysander. I know he loves his mummy, but he's a little dependant. He might have to get over that when she starts to work a bit more especially as Deputy Minister.

OK I'm off to read the next chapter.

@ start chapter fifteen

I haven't read it yet. But I have read the AN's and I saw the 'gorgeousbowneyes wants to meet Harry's partner' thing and I was literally like jumping for joy out of my seat going YES YES YES YES YES YES YES. OK so I'm going to go read it now coz I can't wait any longer.

~gorgeousbowneyes

wow.....Vampires and teething tots.

@ end chapter fifteen

*crickets*

nah just kidding, it was totally nothing I was expecting. But all the same, it was good. I Loooooove Harry as a vampire's mate, so sexy. But, on reflection, I don't think he should play too big a roll in the overall story. I think its getting to the stage where we need to get back to Lucius and Hermione, at the moment I think there are a gazillion little subplots running around but they'll all be tied in together with a little more progression of the plot. How will Hermione have her revenge???

OH My God. I think that's the first time I've ever actually said/asked for more het. That is totally scary. What are you doing to me?????? I think I'm being brainwashed by normal life!!!! Nooooooo take me back to the vampire(Haldor)/Harry sex romp!!!!! I think I'm going to have to go find some nice slash to satisfy my conscience because I pride myself on being an avid slash fan.

Lol enough of that sillyness, I mean what I said above, I think it needs to get it back to Hermione and Lucius.

But all the same, loved this chapter, loved seeing an insight into Harry's life, Harry's world. Isn't it funny that the population don't see Harry's lover vampire as a foul thing but do for Hermione. There's actually a bit of a contradiction in that. By saying that they frown heavily upon unwed women giving birth it implies traditional ideals and attitudes, but their acceptance of Harry being with a male let alone a vampire implies that the community is flexible in regards to sexuality and therefore not as 'traditional' in their ideals and beliefs. Is it that society views men different to women, they have a different set of ideals for each gender? Or perhaps it's because it's THE Harry Potter and by not accepting his preferences and his choice of partner they would be ostracizing him and therefore angering one of the most powerful wizards alive. That however presents another conundrum because by ostracizing Hermione, his may-as-well-be sister, they're also angering Harry.

Maybe I shouldn't point all that out and just go with the flow. But It can all be explained away by 'creative license' lol. But it's also a good thing to consider, but delving into it in the fic isn't necessarily needed or anything because it's something that's not really relevant to progressing the plot.

Man, writing that review actually took a lot of brainpower. I'm going to leave it there and say "Can't wait for the next chapter, old sport." Clearly I've been reading too much of 'The Great Gatsby'. (I'll explain that comment in case you haven't read the book - the main character Jay Gatsby has a habit of saying 'old sport' after mostly everything he says.)

~gorgeousbowneyes

DAMN! Two chapters, you are too quick! Her I am supposed to be studying *looks around the quiet office* and I find you have two new chapters for me to read.
Thakfully they were not too long and I am quite pleased with them.

I am A HUGE vampire fan (if you are too, check out Lynsay Sands Argeneau series *HOT*) so I loved the idea of Harry's mate beign one!!! ANd Harry's gonna be one, yeah!

Okay, so...Hermione has been with Harry for aweek, what happened to Lucius and how did she know he was Max????? Kinda left that part out of the convo when speaking with Harry except to say she was thinking with two minds.
I hope she's not too hard on him.

okay, off to study!!! by tomorrow I will be Licensed!!!

a bit disappointed with this actually. The idea of Harry with a vampire doesn't seem to want to latch on with me. Could just be my preference of him and Ginny. so ignore me on this. Just stating an opinion. I do however like the vampire, he's sweet, not what you would expect. I think vampire and I see cold eery man who wants to bite EVERYONE. I really should go to some group to overcome my predjuces(sp?) against vampires. It's not fair to Haldor.

But onto my disappointment. I was honestly praying for a bit of Lucius. I love Harry, I do truly, it's just I don't care about his love life. haha. I just want to know what Hermione plans to do to Lucius. I also want to know if she starts to fall for him while doing it. He's so cute when he's vulnerable and lonely. On second thought the more you talk about Harry and Haldor the more Lucius and Hermione are kept apart and I can sneak in and steal him for myself. mwahahahaha.

Okay I'm settled down. phew.
I was also disappointed by the length.

I do love it. I'm just being impatient with my wanting to see what will happen with Lucius and Hermione.

This is a strange story. First the porn start thing...bondage on stage with a girl who doesn't know what is going on. Then Lucius has issues because he has never figured out what he needs in love. He hunts down H after he talked to an impotent Sev and admits he has captured her to her extended family.

Who hasn't made an appearance? A vampire who happens to be Harry's mate.

I had a story that wasn't going well. I took it down because I could not figure out how to improve it because I had so much going on all at once. My initial point was that a lot of factors have to come together in order for peace to happen. What I realized was I hadn't brought in enough personal connections for a reader to really feel me or my characters.

For your story, I was feeling Lucius clinging to sex with Juliet because he didn't have anything else. I don't understand why he went the other direction in kidnapping H. There was no way to restore sex if H didn't want to have anything to do with him especially when he traumatized her child. I'm looking forward to seeing how you take their broken hearts and angry friends and bind them all together.