rate_review Reviews

Great story. I loved the beginning; the plot is very original. However, it seems like you skipped 15 chapters or so from their first conversion after H had forgiven L and their marriage. Sorry to read you were so discouraged from a single bad review. Congratulations on finishing your story.

Different but enjoyable all the same. Thank you.

Hey Utopia, I just wanted to drop you a line to let you know I thoroughly enjoyed this story. The concept of the theatre of pleasures is quite original and I have enjoyed especially Max and Juliet's performances together.

I must say that I couldn't really understand why Lucius would break into Hermione's cottage and actually let himself be caught in the act too...he strikes me as a person who is much too sneaky for poor planning like that.

As a matter of fact, I even wrote a spinoff from your story, detailing how I would see Juliet figuring out most of his secrets in one fell swoop. And onstage, of course, haha. Anyways, I had no other means of reaching you, so this is a review and a request in one. Would you like to read my spinoff, and if you're not totally offended by it, could I have your permission to post it on this site?

Hope to hear from you soon,

Seraphin

great story

WOW is all I can say!!

I loved this fic but still I want more!!!

I live on the other side of the Pennines in Manchester (oh the horrid rain!!)

Finding another British writer other than myself and my dearest friend and beta Alabaster Princess very refreshing and uplifting.

What ever you do, don't let your dyslexia get in the way of your love of words and writing, as I can clearly see you have a passion for it!!! I can totally agree with you on the muses running away and not coming back for sometime, mine do it all the time. Usually they come back with a whole different fic completely and force me to write that one before moving on to the previous!!! Daft plot bunnies, but oh how we love them xx

Keep up the fabulous writing and I will be looking out of more of your works.

ANGELWINGZ1983 aka Marion of Manchester (Please, no Maid Marion jokes!) lol x

hilarious. Lucious is such a laugh. I really liked the epilogue

The ending to your story was very evil. Your story, I think was very well thought out, until I unexpectantly got to the end.
I will be reading your other stories, because I think you have a very good imagination.

I have just completed your story. I found it amusing, scary and imaginative. As a author of a few fan fictions I do have a bit of advice. First, trust your instincts. This was a great story and quite original. Second, no one can please everyone so don't worry about the one or two bad reviews. I find that people who can't say why a story is 'bad' and just flames the authors to be of little importance. Perhaps they are afraid of doing their own story, or they are jealous of someone who will stick their neck out. Either way I will keep my eye out for more of your works. I'm usually a SS/HG shipper but on occasion I read a LM/HG story. Keep up the great work, and I hope your plot bunnies continue reproducing.

real good why not make a wizard porn part 2 just for giggles

That was a hilarious chapter!