errorYou must be logged in to review this story.
schedule
May 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was a very dark chapter--but just what we expect from Tom Riddle. How convenient for you, that the HPverse has a built-in villain. Narcissa is in over her head. Hermione is already in it up to her neck--I just hope that Good King Lucius is able to protect her from the matchinations of her sister and Sir Riddle. Cheers!
schedule
May 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love your story. You seem to be basing the beginning of your plot on the movie of the Other Boleyn Girl. If this is so, I hope to see aspects of the movie in your writing, not aspects of the book.
schedule
May 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
well lucius and hermione (when they were with alexender) was cute and well you know you just cant have a story with hermione and not have her have magic. well riddle is just as bad in this as in all harry potter stories-good the way it should be. well narcissa is just twisted in this story and i think it rather fits. well i am dying to have another chapter and soon!!! :) stupid question are you going to have another 'version' of harry somewhere or not (really i dont care one way or another.)?
schedule
May 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! That was an awesome chapter. Great Job. Please add more soon
schedule
May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
RE: chapter four
Oh my, Lucius has an identical twin? How yummy!
Too cool--I love the bit of them being soul-mates, and Hermione's magic being repressed until they met.
Bummer about the queen getting killed in such a brutal way. Although it was in bad taste, it was still pretty hot when Tom christened the occasion by taking Narcissa's virginity and proclaimed that he would keep her for himself.
Oh my, Lucius has an identical twin? How yummy!
Too cool--I love the bit of them being soul-mates, and Hermione's magic being repressed until they met.
Bummer about the queen getting killed in such a brutal way. Although it was in bad taste, it was still pretty hot when Tom christened the occasion by taking Narcissa's virginity and proclaimed that he would keep her for himself.
schedule
May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*Gasp* Narcissa is getting in over her head. And does Lucius know that Riddle is magical and vice versa? These questions beg to be answered. And you m'dear are the only with them....so please update again soon!!
schedule
May 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
RE: chapter one
Brilliantly written--I love what a selfish and spiteful cow Narcissa is portrayed as in comparison to Hermione being shown as a sweet, fresh, young innocent ready for love, if given to her.
Fantastic story! I'm off to chapter two.
;~D
Brilliantly written--I love what a selfish and spiteful cow Narcissa is portrayed as in comparison to Hermione being shown as a sweet, fresh, young innocent ready for love, if given to her.
Fantastic story! I'm off to chapter two.
;~D
schedule
May 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
RE: chapter two
I love how the King and the Queen both prefer Hermione over Narcissa--too cool!
I can't wait to read chapter three--here I come.
;~D
I love how the King and the Queen both prefer Hermione over Narcissa--too cool!
I can't wait to read chapter three--here I come.
;~D
schedule
May 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Re: chapter three
::tears in eyes:: Very passionate, romantic and sweet their sharing their hearts' desire in words and sweetly passionate kisses. It was the words that made me feel the love/feelings that they have for each other, bringing the tears to my eyes, and choking me up. I loved how passionate they are in revealling to us their true-love kisses. Gods how I envy their young love.
;~D
Brilliantly written! Keep up the good work!
::tears in eyes:: Very passionate, romantic and sweet their sharing their hearts' desire in words and sweetly passionate kisses. It was the words that made me feel the love/feelings that they have for each other, bringing the tears to my eyes, and choking me up. I loved how passionate they are in revealling to us their true-love kisses. Gods how I envy their young love.
;~D
Brilliantly written! Keep up the good work!
schedule
May 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love This Story! Please Update soon!!! I want to know what happens next!