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I was just reading this story again earlier today, hoping you would update soon. Lo and behold, you have! I hope another update comes quickly. I really enjoy this story and the direction it's going. Please update soon!

I like it. Please update soon.

Chapter 4: Ah, so now we know for sure Lucius is a wizard. I guess it runs in his family. Oooh, and he senses magic in Hermione? Woo hoo. Two-hour journey, huh? One can do a lot in a closed carriage in two hours. You do have the touch with lovely word-pictures of romantic encounters.

Narcissa is completely on the road to ruin now, with Riddle as her escort. Poor selfish, vain girl. And is the Queen

Chapter 3: Funny that Narcissa would never see the lushness of her sister

Chapter 1: Well, I already like Lucius as a king. Yay, he's a hunk in this fic. I do like a hot Lucius. And he has a way with words, too. It looks like he's going to have a way with Hermione, too. Narcissa is 'pipped at the post'. The court is very sumptuous and glittering. The queen seems nice. Can you get rid of her? (I want the way clear for Hermione - chuckle.)

Yikes! Riddle is in this story? That was a surprise to me. This is an intriguing start. No beheadings, right? I have no suspense backbone. Lily-livered, that's me.

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"she eluded power and grace" - exuded
"At least that was Narcissa hoped." - WHAT Narcissa hoped

Chapter 2: So Narcissa is already acting like a witch and she may not even be a real one in this story. It

Now that was good! In the beginning of the story I thought: Okay, thats a remake of the "Tudors". But further on in the story with the magic kicking in it got more and more interessting. Specially when Tom killed the queen and started taking Narcissa. I can't wait for the update, although I started reading the story so late.
LOL, Alex

Wow! Go Lucius! Great job. Please add more soon

if she really left i am going to annoyed--if narcessia lied i am going to k i l l her!!! well at lest lucius is going to get her back! :) do update soon like really soon! i want to know what happens!!

this really was the best chapter so far. the detail you put into is is amazing. i know i have told you this before, but its true. just wanted to tell you again. i am very proud of your writing and prooud to call you a friend as well!!!

Love our late night talks...they help keep me sane!!!!

Lady B