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for To Enchant a King

by LadyVoldemort87

schedule August 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 5

Squee! You brought in one of my favorite characters, Mr. Ollivander. Of course you probably already guessed that from my story, The Sorcerer
schedule August 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 4

Wow, you do such a good job getting me caught up in Hermione and the King
schedule August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3

Narcissa is so spiteful. What a bitch! I almost think she would endanger her own sister, just so she could get even with her and knock her out of the competition. I think Narcissa better be careful though. If the King has set his sights set on Hermione and plans to protect her, he won
schedule August 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2

Aw Lady Voldemort, I think this story is so well done. I love how you are developing this story slowly and you seem to be picking up all the nuances of court life. I am worried about Hermione though. I feel the King will break her heart. Of course I am loving it though, that Narcissa is eating her heart out with jealously. Excellent Job!
schedule August 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 1

Lady Voldemort, this is lovely and well written! Already I have been drawn into your story. I love historical stories and I love Lucius as King. (Actually I already think he considers himself a king anyway) LOL
Anyway, I think you have done a great job of drawing us into the period!

And the characterizations are great! I love seeing Narcissa turn green with envy, and I love the fact that Lucius already prefers Hermione, the plain sister.

I had to laugh that you put Tom Riddle in story. (I mean I guess you had to when he
schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 8: the beginning has a glorious occasion, the birth of little Lady Angelique. Then the vortex starts to whirl again. Hermione is beginning to see some light with her sister
person Citten
schedule July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Good chapter!! Poor Hermione well at least Lucius was right there, I love that he followed her! Well I am glad that you are back to the writing. I had no idea that you were having muse problems-that just sucks! Well I am glad that you are up and running again. I really like Severus and his wife she is cute. Did not expect to have her be the dormant one though, I am use to having him be the one. Usually I am more toward male dominance but for you I will try. :) I am look forward to the next chapters!!! I do hope that you will be updating and soon!!!! Need any help or ideas just let us know we might just be able to help the juices start to flow anytime you need it. :)
schedule July 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I'm so excited you updated! And I'm so excited that Lucius and Hermione are back together. Sort of. But yeah. Yay! lol I can't wait for more, hope you update again soon!!
person Evee
schedule July 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
O my, I am in love with your story!!!!!!! Your an amazing writer :D. Plz update soon!!!!!
schedule July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Brillian update!! =) we saw a bit into each characters life, i am glad that hermione is back by lucius' side. can't wait to see what the next chapters bring!! Keep up the awesome work!!

Lady B
xoxoxo