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wow update soon *kisses*

I hate to say it....but I kinda feel bad for Narcissa.... Maybe...(oh, i'm going to regret saying this)..maybe it could be a shortened sentence as a gift to Hermione? Or maybe on the day of his child's birth? As a kind of "hey world, I'm so happy I have a child that I'm going to let his aunt out of prision early so that she can be with her kid" thing? I don't know, I'm just babbling. Seriously though, that must really hurt, to be separated from your child immediately at his birth.

But Yay! to Lucius and Hermione getting married and getting their smut on! Very nice job there.
I can't wait to read more, so please keep writing. Thanks.
WZC.

Wow! I really love this story! I love the Tudor dynasty & Lucius Malfoy. Put them together,,, bliss! Please keep writing!

Just to be the 100th reviewer (LOL) I do have to add that I loved the picture. Lucius did look rather hot. ;)

What a mixed review this will be...In part one I was in absolute tears. Why is it one always realises almost too late who they truly love. Poor Narcissa. I know she deserved her punishment but I felt so sorry for her and to have her child taken from her, well at the rate I'm going through tissues I'm going to have to get a crate load in. On the plus side it's a great excuse to eat more chocolate - LOL - (like I need one) I'm kind of hoping they get their reunion after the ten years though, (you've turned me into a soppy romantic, goshdarnit). And for the second part, whew! In the first place I want to order one of those pert, scrumptious bottoms for myself. LOL And then the King can rock on over to my place and give me a bit of that royal treatment. (waves hand in front of her face). Now that was HOT! And I loved some of the phrases you used to describe their actions and body parts, tastefully naughty. WELL DONE!!

I like it. Please update soon.

Chapter 10: Treason isn

Chapter 11: So Narcissa was seduced by the power of the position of Queen. Sad. Even sadder that she felt no one really loved her

Chapter 9 part 1

Ooo I am somewhat scared for Narcissa. Treason is a serious crime! Yikes! Lucius decided not to have her head though. She is sentenced to ten years in the Tower of London. That is such a grim place.

Producto potion? What pregnant woman wouldn

Chapter 10 part 2

Oh how do you do that? Now I feel sorry for Narcissa. A couple of chapters ago I thought she would deserve what she got. LOL
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