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for To Enchant a King

by LadyVoldemort87

person Citten
schedule May 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
okay so far i love the story and i really cant wait until the next chapter you are helping me feel better. (my purse and camera-with pitures were stolen out of my car on sunday while at church.:( ) well anyways you are making things a little easier. so i do hope that you will be posting soon-like really soon! :) i love that you made sirious hermione's brother! well this story really makes me not like narrcissa-though i really did not like her before, so no loss there. i also really love that lucius is and was able to spot and drawn to hermione so i could deal with this story being really, really long. :)
schedule May 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh that's was such a sweet chapter! I loved it. Please add more soon
schedule May 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have to say AU fics aren't really my thing but I am interested to see where this one goes...but the question is...when are Lucius and Hermione going to fuck? I reckon that's what everyone wants to know!...LOL

Great work keep it up!....like an erection....ROFLMBFAO!
person Tygerlily
schedule May 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Gah! So much in this chapter and yet not nearly enough! I was just getting into it again and it ended. Devestation is the only way I can describe my reaction when I reached the end. I'm already itching for more lol.

Anyway I'm really excited about Lucius's reaction to Hermione and vice versa. Things are certainly heating up there, I can't wait for Narcissa's reaction to it all. As I said before I'm still really curious about Lucius's marriage but I can happily wait for later chapters. I'm just hoping for more interaction between Hermione and Lucius and getting to know them as these characters a bit better and then you mentioned magic coming into play and just... ah! So much to it all

You've got my attention, more soon... please! lol
schedule May 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Abso-freaking-lutely amazing! Ahh I'm so in love with this story! I can't wait for more....
schedule May 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow that was awsome .. please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel
schedule May 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome update. Please add more soon
schedule May 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Moooooooooorrrrrrrrreeeeeee. I like it. Please update soon.
person nikkuman
schedule May 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2 and I still love this story. And how often do I review stories? Almost never
person Tenar10r
schedule May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great Start!