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for Supernatural Abyss

by samantha1985

person Anon
schedule June 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Edward?
person azinine
schedule June 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*snorts* Demanding bitch (Anita). She just needs to up and die. She doesn't deserve where she is now. Harry should just kick her ass and be done with it. Heh. Let Harry get all the boys and glory. He's far more deserving than the cunt.
person sp
schedule April 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have injoyed reading your story very much. Continue soon.
schedule April 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT!! What will Narcissis (sp) do with her? I wonder what Harry would say to him killing off all female hyenas. Hmmm.... Like I said, I love this story and I can't wait til you update. Update soon....PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
schedule April 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great new chapter hope to see more soon!
schedule April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Cool story. Do More.

But you really need to start a new paragraph when you switch speakers. It's confusing.
person chineseartist
schedule April 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ooh, i wonder what's gonna happen with anita and harry. i mean, he's got a right to be pissy with necromancers, but he's also got much more flexible magic than she does, so if worst comes to worst, he could always destroy any corpses she animated to the point of ash or vapor. i'd pay to see the look on anita's face if that happened. well, still like the fic, good luck with the rest.
person flames
schedule April 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is great i can't wait for the next chapter1 though i do have to wonder about how anita is feeling i mean if he can feel he magic then she should feel his i just wonder what his magic felt like to her.
schedule April 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i like this story its au but i can/t wait to see what happens with the causin and dumble please update soon and finish this story i have read a lot of crossovers that never get updated or even finish
person sanda
schedule April 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good chapter