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April 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like this story you portray the difficulties of being a single mom at a young age. i hope to read more soon
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April 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Is it possible that Hermione only THINKS Ruthie's dad is a muggle? Death Eaters have been known to play some cruel pranks on each other, especially Lucius. Hmm, take some polyjuice, add an imperio, don't forget to obliviate after and presto! Severus is a dad. And nobody's the wiser, except maybe..... Albus?!? Just a thought**chuckles** I'm enjoying the story and am excited to see where it is gonna go.
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April 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was an excellent chapter. I think it's sweet the way Severus is with Ruthie. I can't wait to read more soon.
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April 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OOOoOoo I loved Stephen King's IT.....the book and the movie respectively. Harry seems to have really bad timing just when they were in the middle of kissing. I hope Hermione gets so scared she jumps right into Severu's lap. *Grins*
Well done!
Well done!
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April 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
mwahaha i like this story =D
keep it up!
keep it up!
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April 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow, what a dick Harry is here. (nah, I have friends just like that, and I react just like Hermione.) I liked this chappie a lot. It seemed to meld the and catch the whole feel of the story finally. not saying that it's your writing, it's more that all the characters are so out-of-character. It finally just all cam together for me. this is very nice, and a good read. I do wonder what's up with Ruthie's father, and the fact that he would seem to know about the magical world. and i still want to know how her pregnancy wasn't uncovered in her 5th year! That really is the biggest glaring inconsistency. At least tell me if it will be solved when we find out about Ruthie's father. also, THANK YOU for making this Ron an Evil!Ron. I really don't like him much.
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April 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The suspense of the identity of Ruthie's father is killing me!
Though the idea of Severus eating macaroni and hotdogs in the last chapter was quite comical. For some reason I got the odd picture of him sitting there next to the child, both with cheese in the corner of their mouths XD
Though the idea of Severus eating macaroni and hotdogs in the last chapter was quite comical. For some reason I got the odd picture of him sitting there next to the child, both with cheese in the corner of their mouths XD
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April 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aw! The beauty and the beast :)
It's my favorite Disney Movie and it was when I was younger too. There's a good morals in it. And it fits perfectly to the story.
Love your story, by the way ^.^
It's my favorite Disney Movie and it was when I was younger too. There's a good morals in it. And it fits perfectly to the story.
Love your story, by the way ^.^
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April 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really don't blame Hermione for wanting to cover her eyes during the movie "IT". I did the exact same thing when I watched it. I definately think that Severus wants to go farther with Hermione. I can't wait to read the next chapter soon.
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April 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this story. Please post again soon. Thanks.