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for My Life

by shanarenea

person zucca
schedule April 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like the story so far however i think that you forgot a chapter
schedule April 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol that was great but damn harry and his timing :P
schedule April 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule April 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oooo lol i think i would like him "not being so nice" either if that was the outcome :P lol
person wicraven
schedule April 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great post, love the story, can't wait until you post again, so please post again soon. Thanks.
schedule April 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. I can't wait to read the next one soon.
schedule April 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yeiiiiii n___n

iluv the story =D

now to the fun part ^.^
schedule April 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this just keeps getting better and better. i can't wait to see what he will do. please post soon.
schedule April 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was great. I am glad that Ruthie was found safe and sound. I think it would be great if Severus and Hermione would begin a relationship with each other, at least until Voldemort reveals what his plans for her are. A twist in the story could be that Lucius gets aggrivated and kidnaps Hermione and/or Ruthie. He feels as though he should get everything he wants and not being able to harm them pushes him over the edge. Then when they are found, Voldemort could punish him severely. I don't think Lucius should be killed though. Every story needs villans. I look forward to reading more soon.
person wicraven
schedule April 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great post, love the story, can't wait until you post again, so please post again soon. Thanks.