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for My Life

by shanarenea

schedule April 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Hermione...she must feel horrible!!! Can't wait for the next chapter! Post soon ^^!
schedule April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I agree that Harry should stay at Hogwarts because he might be targeted if he went out. I hope they will find out exactly who killed her parents. That way the person can be dealt with. I look forward to reading more soon.
schedule April 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was great i'm so glad you didn't drop the fic
person Anon
schedule April 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Anon
schedule April 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Anon
schedule April 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please update. i am looking forward to the next chapter
schedule April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. I think Hermione is having a really tough time, raising her daughter, finding out Voldemort is Ruthie's father, falling for Severus, and now finding out that her parents have been killed. I also think that it would be just plain cruel if Voldemort issued the attack on Hermione's parents after saying that no harm was to come to her and Ruthie. My guess is that Lucius Malfoy took it upon himself to attack them because he can't harm Hermione and Ruthie. If he did, I hope that Voldemort finds out and punishes him to near death. I look forward to reading more soon.
person wicraven
schedule April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great post, love the story, can't wait until you post again, so please post again soon. Thanks.
person Utopia
schedule April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm a new reader, and chapter one was a great start, but could do with more formatting. You have put each new speaker on a new line, but it would be a lot easier to read if there was a line between this as well. On my screen its just a big block of text, and not all that appealing. The formatting should only take a minute or two to sort out.
schedule April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*stomps foot* I want MORE! ok my inner child gets out sometimes....but honestly I really like where this is going and Ruthie is great! Keep up the great work!!!!