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for My Life

by shanarenea

person Anon
schedule September 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
schedule September 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule September 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey there!
Just started reading the first chapter, and I like it already!
I have a thousand questions bubbling up inside me, but I'll keep most of them tightly lidded =D
How is Harry seventeen, and how does Hermione already have a child???
Whose child is it?
I am sooo curious...

schedule September 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM

Hey, I'm really enjoying the story (on the second chapter now), and I don't mean to flame you or anything, but it might be more pleasant to read if you got a beta-reader, if you haven't gotten one already.

I could help you with that if you want!

Anyway, it's a great story and I love Ruthie so much.

Let me know if I can be of service to you. <3
schedule September 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM

Oh my gosh, Ron is such a dick... I hope he comes to understand Hermione.
I know a lot of people think Ron is an arse, but in the actual stories, he is kind of endearing.
Either way, I am totally not liking your Ron =/
But Severus, now there's a man!
schedule September 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A great chapter. I look forward to reading more.
schedule September 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love it so far xxxxxxxxxxx
schedule September 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That's all I can say for now. I love this story! I can't wait to read more. Update again and soon! I have to know what happens next!

Tiffany
person amsev
schedule September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very intriguing story! Very nicely written for a first fic. I look forward to reading more.
person Anon
schedule September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
are you ever going to finish this story????? you really need to finish this,,so get to it..