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Another great chapter. I am curious as to why Harry and Ron are at Hogwarts if it's summertime. Did Dumbledore send for them? I think the reason Hermione is scared and has nightmares is because she was either raped or has been abused sexually by someone. I hope that she will eventually tell Severus about it. She needs to open up to someone about what has happened. I can't wait to read the next chapter.

An interesting story, I look forward to read more, but please say you will hurt Ron for me?????

This is shaping up to be a great story. I am super curious about little Ruth's paternity. I am a read and writer who sees the jumo from bumbling Ron to angry, bitter, vengeful Ron as a logical progression of his immaturity. You may want to find a beta, or at least a proof reader to take care of some of the minor errors in spelling and grammaer, but they are not too serious and they are not detracting from the story (I am a professional proofer and I still find mistakes in my oen writing - I get so pumped to post that I am not as careful as I should be!). Please keep writing - I am looking forward to the next chapter.

This is an intriguing story. I just wonder how she hid her pregnancy from everyone, and who Ruthie's father is. It's not Hermione's father, obviously. I like this. though Snape's a little OOC.

I love it!!!!!! I can tell that this is going to be an amazing story!!!

I like the idea, but the story itself needs work. There's no feeling behind it when read. No narative to explain motives, thoughts, feeling, ect. That makes it very boring. Also try spacing out the paragraphs (don't forget when doing dialogue that each person gets their own paragraph when talking) that'll make it easier on the eyes to read. Anyway, keep trying you'll get it eventually.

Excellent chapter. I think a very strong bond has be created between Ruthie and Severus. I can't wait to read more soon.

I'm so loving this story, I got a feeling I know what happen to Hermione but I will reserve my judgement until I read more. Ruthie is such a sweet little girl and Ron deserved that slap for what he said to her. Anyways I can't wait unitl you update again. Well done

That was a great start...i think she's either a muggle boy's or Victor's

Nice start. Can't wait to see how the story grows.