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May 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I love this pair, but I especially love the different takes on them as students, rather than adults. Their dynamic as teens is so much more raw and unchecked in comparison to their adult selves.
I especially liked it when Lucius thought about following orders of someone other than Riddle! Nice touch!
The ending was so bittersweet! Poor Lucius with his sticky sheets and lack of Sev!
10/10
I especially liked it when Lucius thought about following orders of someone other than Riddle! Nice touch!
The ending was so bittersweet! Poor Lucius with his sticky sheets and lack of Sev!
10/10
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February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I liked this very much. Seeing Lucius madly in love with Severus is a nice twist. Most stories I have read have it the other way around. Although some small part of me started wondering if maybe this is just a fantasy of Lucius', still I felt so very sorry for him when it turned out that I was right.
Maybe you want to write a second chapter with these two and neither is dreaming?
Maybe you want to write a second chapter with these two and neither is dreaming?