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I liked this, very much so:-) It was very well written, had a interesting plot, and not at least, and almost most important; it had Hermione dumping Ron in the first chapter. I really, truly hate the Ron/Hermione pairing, they are just not suitable. That leads to me being rather entertained by Ron-bashing, and if you put some Ginny-bashing into the mix, you have my whole and complete attention. I hope you will give us a Hermione who accepts that those she thougth were her friends has a long way to go before they grow up, and that they have a very short memory with regard to who has the brain. With that I mean that she should not at any point help them any more in classes, if they want to demonstrate that they think she should be happy to be a stay-at-home wife with nothing better to do than cook dinner and listen to Ron prattling about quiddish, then she should be strong enough to realise that their "friendship" require sacrifaces she won't even consider comply too!
Update again soon!!!

that was great i hope they both hex all the Grif's ears off together ... its a sweet way to spend time together :P

Please update. This sounds great.

A very nice start!

I like it. Please update soon.

this is a pretty good start, never really liked her and ron together ne ways :)

Good job. I think this has some real potential :D
I'll be checking in for more updates.

Yeay!!! Break them up!!!! Hermione and Snape forever! So, this looks like a nice start. Well written. I look forward to more, and I have to hint that I wouldn't mind longer chapters.