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for The Death Eater's Valentine

by soldiersgirl0709

schedule February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Fun story!
person Damiana
schedule February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Loads of fun!

I look forward to reading more of your stories. :)
person sma11t0wngir1
schedule February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I cruise the site trying to find good stories and sometimes it's hard. But when I do, I keep coming back to it to see if it's updated. If i really love it, I bookmark it and I check it constantly. If by the end it turns out to have been fanstastic I keep it bookmarked so I can reread every once and a while. This story was one of the fanstastic ones. I couldn't stop reading, I was totally addicted. It was so good that I went to your page to look at other stories you've written (something I NEVER do). Once I got there I realized that every story that I've kept to reread, was written by you. I never noticed before. You are truely amazing and I can't wait for your next story. I know it'll be equally brilliant. I just thought I'd let you know that your very very talented. Please keep writing.

sma11t0wngir1

P.S I completly agree with your Lucius, Severus snadwhich idea. :)
schedule February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story!
person ladyluv
schedule February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved the first chapter and how he finished "How will we pass the time" - big sexy Lucius - you can see his mind turning over the possibilities
schedule February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I wish I could give this story 1,000 stars!
person rainaangel
schedule February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hehe - tomatoe plants!! Thanks so much for writing this story - have loved reading it! Really great work :)
schedule February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH DARLING!
it was lovely
I love it very very much
Kudos for you
well goodbye for now
take lots of care

Lola
person Utopia
schedule February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
With the absence of the light-speed, super-fast update I thought your hubby might be back and you were... well, enjoying the old ways with him! Not that everything was going wrong! So sorry to hear about the dog, I hope your kiddies are doing Ok with the loss, it isn't easy for them to understand. I've said it before, and I'll say it again: you are an incredibly strong woman, and I don't know how you have the immense strength to cope with your hubby being away and in such a perilous situation! Andy is only an hour-and-a-half away and perfectly safe, and we go nuts without each other! You're a credit to all things female! Everything will be alright soon!

Right... what was I going to put in here before I read the A/N??? *scratches head*

Oh yes! I remember! I loved how the revels weren't rape and torture; but they fought to please their captive and show off their sexual prowess! (Though, I'm slightly worried that Voldemort liked that sort of thing - seriously, if the reincarnation-potiony-thingy at the graveyard in GOF couldn't manage to create a nose - what chance did a penis and testicles have? (I think about these things - I think I'm a tad wierd!)

So, why did Snape and Lucius sit the revels out? Was Lucius loyal to his wife and not prepared to play away (but where does that leave Sev?? Sev didn't have a love interest... *ponders*) Or was it that these two wizards knew their way around a woman's body without the need of a map and guide dog?? Would it be unfair of Voldie to put those two into the 'arena' as it would be a smidge demorilising to the other Death Eaters? As every woman knows, mock a man's ability in bed and bye-bye ego and confidence. (And I still maintain that falling asleep while with Andy was because I was ill - not because it wasn't good! *hangs head in shame*)

anyway - enough about my embarrassing moments! 15/10!
person Utopia
schedule February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Bottle of wine, clothes, dragon... yep, that'll do for me!!

I loved how the 'little Norbet' burnt down the table! Where the heck are they going to keep it?! Though, it would make a cracking 'guard dog', wouldn't it - a thief wouldn't take on something that breathes fire! lol! I'm sure that Hagrid will give it a home (I can see it snuggled up in Fang's basket and watching the care of magical creatures lessons); or even Charlie in Romania! (Though, I suspect Charlie may have been the supplier in the first place!)

I loved Hermione's gran - 'Great, how's viagra going to help my tomatoes?' ROFLMAO!!! I bet she thinks wizards have some strange gardening techniques!

So they didn't move in together? Odd - but I guess Hermione needed some personal space once in a while, though, with a Manor like THAT space wouldn't really be a problem. She could give the flat to Snape - it would be better than Spinner's End for him! Or has Lucius already found tenants and is raking in the galleons from that?

They're getting married. Awww. Are her family not going, I got the impression they weren't - or is it just that they won't know what to expect from it? I wonder how Harry and Ron took it? And did Hermione drop hints to how much *better* Lucius is in the sack, against a wall, in the shower, in the flowerbeds, on the dining table... (you get the picture! lol!). Flipping heck! What about Draco's reaction to all this, and to his new Mummy? LOL!

So Snape is still part of this somewhere, but in more of a platonic sense? (though, could you *survive* the two of them at the same time?) I presume he's best man?

Off the scale, luv! FANTASTIC!