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for The Death Eater's Valentine

by soldiersgirl0709

person smmz79
schedule January 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i am glad that severus at least has brains enough to know that hermione was upset... and lucius was getting jealous.... nice well lets see what this old ways jazz is about
person smmz79
schedule January 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
umm hell NO i would not be able to resist him... but hermione did a good job she resisted him as long as she could
person smmz79
schedule January 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh wow now that was great and it got the response he was hoping for great job!!!!!!
person smmz79
schedule January 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ahhh now that was a great fic... ok so that was soo funny giving her dad a miniature hungarian horntail bc she was not a virgin... ha ha ha ha and severus offering to make viagra for her grandpa yep that was soo funny... ok off to read about draco
person smmz79
schedule January 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
nice first chap i am glad that hermione does not back down from lucius... i believe tat this is going to be an interesting valentines evening for them both
person smmz79
schedule January 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh wow now wasn't that hot... you can chase me into the sex dungeons if you want lucius....
person smmz79
schedule January 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow he really knows how to take control of any situation that presents its self in front of him.... he is breaking through her mental walls... that will definitely lead him to her bed that and his seducing voice.... he is very smart
person smmz79
schedule January 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
holy crap that was hot.. talk about breaking down her resistance... very nice on to the next chap... i really need to buy a fan... bc this is HOT!!!
person smmz79
schedule January 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
omg that was very intimate why do i think that lucius feels more for hermione then he is letting on... ok so he is contacting severus oh boy he is trying to push hermiones boundaries
person smmz79
schedule January 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hmmm this is going to get interesting... hmmm he really knows how to tempt a woman while meeting his owns needs as well... so i guess he got severus to agree this should be good