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for The Death Eater's Valentine

by soldiersgirl0709

person rainaangel
schedule January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another great couple of chapters & now severus has joined! yay! Thanks for updating! Great story :)
person angeleye68
schedule January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chap5/6 - absolutely wonderful. Did I ever tell you how much I love your Lucius -- arrogant, wicked, sensual and emitting sex at ever turn. And now I see that Severus is getting into the mix, oh my, you are venturing into areas to push our little witch, Hermione. Can't wait for the next chapter as you do have a way with words and the images depicted, just grand! Brava and cyber chocolates to you!! -- K
schedule January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapters 5-6: There is almost nothing better than Lucius
schedule January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I see a threesome in the future! If I'm right, I can't wait to read it. ;)
schedule January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was a great chapter. I can't wait to read more to see how Hermione reacts to the guest at dinner.
schedule January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
the valentine rhyme was brilliant!
cant wait for more!
schedule January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So my breath caught in my throat when Lucius invited Severus to 'dinner'. I can't wait for your next update.
schedule January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
.....!!!! You have my full attention!!!!!
person ...
schedule January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, but please dont make it into a Severus/hermione or Severus/hermione/Lucius thing, i would be so disapointed :( dont get me wrong, i dont mind Hermione/Severus, but i like luicus/hermione so much better, and its the reason im reading the story...
person angeleye68
schedule January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG -- I did not see that coming at all. Naked Lucius spread-eagle in chains, I think my heart has just stopped for moment and request the key to that cell as I would really like to be there with him...hmmm, I wonder what Severus is up to??? This is just getting better and better.. Two updates in one day----a big ole thank you from the Garden State!!! Cyber cookies and brownies to you!!