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for The Death Eater's Valentine

by soldiersgirl0709

schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh......my.....GAWD!! I don't think I've read a story quite this hot it a while. A few angry little stripes across Lucius' backside will do him well...I know they'd make me feel better. I love this pairing. They are such an unlikely couple that it just makes me happy when a story comes along that successfully pairs them off. And this is one of them.

I want to read more...but first....I need to go to the store and stock up on my batteries.....if you catch my drift...
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOOOOW!!!! MY ....That's my boy!!
Amazing chapter! It took my breath away!! LOL Severus is a little devil, isn't he? eheh But Lucius deserves a little payback for humiliation and the way he decided to play with her !And Severus knows how to play those little games even better than his friend! And best of all it's going to be a lot of fun!HAHAHA
And yes, he is temptation...they bought are!! And you write them better than anyone!
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh. Oh oh oh. This is my OT3. Lumionus. And Lucius/Hermione is my (secret) OTP, so it's like my birthday and Christmas came around a whole year early. Especially possessive!Lucius and smut. And Severus is like The God of Sexuality all over there on his own. Hmm. *tries to look patient as waits for more*
person Delfin
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
by all means continue with this story and with the other 2 u said u have in mind about Lucius >:)

haha :P

i love it and now that Sev is involved grrr gives it a little extra if ya know ;) haha :D

person koneko-chan
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is getting to be a good story. I'm liking it. Keep going! I can't wait for the next update.
person Donavon
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant two chapters, I love the way you turned Lucius'game against him.
Severus was just wonderful. Best wishes,
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Umm. I'd like a 'bad influence' too please. Great update, I can't wait for more!
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
whew what a chapter! amazing.

i loved the part where hermione confesses that lucius hasn't even taken her on a date, and say although muffeld that he hasn't had the chance, i would love to see that date, lol, if sev had anything to do with it.

i love sevs naughtiness in this fic...go severus!

cant wait for the next chapter!
person lazart
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
God I love Severus!! Can't wait for the next chapter! Don't keep us waiting too long!
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
so lucius gets taken down a notch or two, i like it...she's a lucky witch, Hermione, to have lucius and severus. i think i am jealous...lol. looking forward to more!!