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Hmm... it seems Lucius and Hermione think differently of their night together. For once, the woman is less attatched than the man. I love those sort of tense situations, something about being pursued...

Is this heading towards a threesome? Or is Severus going to become a player in a love triangle? Rival's... even more appealing that the chase...

Anyway! Lovely story, I can't wait for your next update.

See, I'm torn, because the Lumionus!smut fan in me really just wants to see a ton of hot action, but the literary critic in me is fascinated with the power dynamics and the characters' motivations. I mean, why is Severus taunting Lucius like this? It's not wise, and you'd think he'd realize that. And what exactly is he getting out of using Hermione to manipulate Lucius? And, okay, so this whole experience will probably have taught Lucius to respect Hermione, that she's not a toy to be manipulated, and make him that much more possessive of her, but she's treading a fine line, because we all know that when Malfoys pout, they're inclined to cut off their noses--or, well, their other protruding features--to spite their faces.

And she obviously wants to keep Lucius. She'd be completely off her nut if she didn't. The rest of us do.

How short sighted of me. It's late, and some how I missed all the chapters after six, luckily I breezed through the reviews and caught on to my mistake.

Both wizards, both interested, both rivals, AND still it manages to resemble a threesome!

Oh take your time, honey, I am thouroughly enjoying this, and every time Severus becomes more tempted, and Lucius more jealous, my heart gives a little jump.

Now if you'll excuse me, I'm going to go wake up my boyfriend. I think he'll forgive me. UPDATE SOON!

Smut away dear author! I love a sneaky Slytherin and you're giving me two! Snape is deliciously manipulative here, and Hermione is falling into her role quite well. Thanks for sharing! Pitt

Incredible! I can't believe Lucius and Severus planned this out, so very slytherin of them. lol. But still unexpected. At least Hermione had her revenge but she still seems hurt. :( Lucius better make it up to her! Can't wait for the next update.

Chapter 10: Once again you have outdone yourself. This was soo much fun to read, and I could just imagine how surprised Severus was when she chained him up as well. Kudos to Hermione for giving these naughty wizards a taste of their own,, submissives always turn out to be the best masters. I feel a little sorry for Lucius but he got exactly what he deserves however, Hermione was still the one to pay through her tears for him and a love that could have been. I am dying to know where you are going to go next with this. Till next time -- K

This was a great chapter. I hope that Hermione is careful while playing with the two men, so that she doesn't get hurt later. I look forward to reading more soon.

looks like old lucys getting attached to his little one...

gods snape is so sexy and so naughty!

brilliant chapter!

Chap 8: Now, I didn't expect that, but I have to say, I do like this side of Hermione and who better than Severus to "teach" her about the "darker side". BTW: love that you had her change into her own special Death Eaters outfit and robes. I think Lucius may have met his match with Hermione as it appears the little witch is letting loose her inhibitions. This is getting sooo good.

Wow! I never saw this coming! Once again, amazing work.