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for The Death Eater's Valentine

by soldiersgirl0709

person Tenar10r
schedule January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A wonderfully bad influence!
person Jesse
schedule January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!
person KraeHi
schedule January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMFG that is soooooo delicious! Hmm me thinks a little friendly double play??? you write such yummy stories!

Much love

Anya
schedule January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
:O

oh no!

bad lucius!

even badder sev!

go hermione for not standing for it!

brilliant chapter!
person Utopia
schedule January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oi! Missus! When were you going to tell me this was posted?!

You sneaky Slytherin!!
person Utopia
schedule January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
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Lucius needs the wizarding equivalent of a Filofax, he'd remember his appointments then! He's probably forgetful after inhaling all the fumes from his haircare products! lol.

I loved how Hermione still calls Harry and Ron 'The Boys' and that Harry sent her chocolate - though was probably reminded by Ginny to do so.

Lucius is an arse man in this one then, I always see him as a leg man, personally. Though the conversation was quite amusing, I had one similar with my other half recently! lol.

Short!! I'll have you know that 5' tall is the way to go! And I do believe the word Lucius is looking for is PETITE! And if I could reach I'd slap him for the miniature comments!

The buzzer was a bit short wasn't it! It didn't give anyone who's lost track of time long to escape the building, though Hermione's reason for why was quite amusing.

Oh, what will they do? (but as this is AFF, I have three guesses... and Scrabble isn't one of them.)

Nice Start!
person Utopia
schedule January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
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In my random rambles through HP philosophy, which I have from time to time, I have wondered if Voldemort had a you-know-whatsit after he was 're-formed' at the graveyard... I mean, the spell couldn't manage a nose, I doubt it could manage boy-bits-and-pieces!! LOL! I bet he liked to watch because he couldn't participate! *head, gutter*

A Death Eater Pleasure dungeon, lovely... where is it? Do you sell tickets? ~And is a certain long-haired-blonde available for hire?

So Severus isn't dead (hurrah!), alive, kicking and kinky as ever! (Hurrah!)


person Utopia
schedule January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HARRY! yuck. They're like siblings! *icky thoughts, icky thoughts*

I tell you what, if she doesn't want to play with the man, I will gladly take the task to hand for her... gladly, willingly... I'll beg, I'll plead... let me have hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiim!

person Utopia
schedule January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Utterly Jealous of Hermione.
Completely envious.

Mmm... isn't it an interesting thought that you could be sat in potions fantasising over Snape and him know all about it - the images he must have got in his head over the years! Mmmm... I could swap the blonde for that!

The smut was quite sweet really, Lucius is initiating her slowly, but he warned her she was playing with a man... and Man-Oh-Man does that normally involve some powerful smut in your writing!
person Tenar10r
schedule January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! What an ending to CH 10!!! *faint*