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Please oh please get Hermione pregnant.

The rest of the story should stay as the foursome. I want to see one big family where Harry and Ron alternate getting the other girl pregnant for the rest of their lives.

you know i have to say that that is really hot *kisses*

I can see that the '19' missing years in canon would be interesting with this as a background.
Good read so far!

Wow, I love this story. Keep it going, brilliant job so far. Love the four of them getting on, looking forward to all the combinations you can come up with.

Oh my God. I absolutely LOVE this story. I'm a dedicated H/Hr shipper too, but if more get in on the action, H/Hr + R/G is my absolute ALL TIME favorite. I can't stand R/Hr alone, but if it's part of a foursome where they've swapped, I can handle it. I even don't mind H/R + Hr/G if it's a swap scene. But whatever you decide to do, please keep up the great work.

Don't worry too much about that sexist comment. It sounds like you don't, but I just wanted to confirm what you said. Technically, your statements ARE sexist, because they're generalizations about what MOST men and women TEND to prefer. And as you point out, they are generalizations because they are true. But you understand there are exceptions and I think most people understand that they are generalizations. But there are some people out there who are easily offended, so you have to take their comments in that context.

Anyway, keep up the great work! BTW, since Hermione and Ginny seem to have expressed interest in seeing Harry and Ron fool around, but the guys seem opposed, let me say this. If you the author are uncomfortable with that, then I understand and respect that fully. But if only Harry and Ron seem unsure, let me say this: you get two teenage guys hot enough (say, have them watch their girlfriends make out) and even the straightest of guys will find themselves with wandering hands. Keep it up (say, the girls engage in 69), and the guys can find themselves unable to resist. As long as it's "just fooling around" and the situation is right (like a M/M & F/F foursome swap) a lot of guys would be surprised to find themselves engaging in a little 69 themselves. Penetration, though, is a much harder hurdle to cross. But besides, I expect the girls would be so turned on by the guys kissing and 69'ing that they would insist upon breaking them up to have them for themselves. LOL.

Anyway, wherever you decide to take this story is fine with me. I just feel lucky enough to have come across another H/Hr + R/G gem. Keep up the great work.

This sure is sexist. No,thats not a good thing

hey! You leave us hanging at the end of a good chapter...with no idea when you're going to update! I really hope that you've not decided to abandon this story..because, smut aside (and who doesn't like good smut?), you've started to craft a very interesting and potentially very compelling story - with twists and details I hadn't expected. I particularly like the bit about the snitch at the end of Chapter 4. I thought that was a very good (and original) take on a detail that JKR all but forgot to expand on.

So - please keep this going. It will be good to see how you perceive the rest of the story working out.

Regards,

the_scribbler

I love what you have done so far with the story. I also like the fact that you have kept some of the original in there also. I look forward to reading the rest of the story as you continue to write it.