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by soldiersgirl0709

schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I must say I really enjoyed that chapter especially. Poor Draco having to first try to get her into her dress then help her go to the washroom. I found that hillarious. I thought it funny with the Harry getting the boquet as well and Lucius being a sweetheart. Though I'm always estatic when you update, as you're my favourite author on this site. Anyways keep up the great work!
person Tenar10r
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
SQUEE! I loved the wedding! that was great!
person Utopia
schedule January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
If you'd have phoned me at that time, you'd have got more than an earful for waking me up! LOL!

Snape certainly buggered that up, didn't he! It just shows that the calm, orientated potions master is actually easily ruffled and has a small mountain of insecurities to plough through before he will be truly happy.

Though, I'd have been happier if he'd got down on one knee and done it properly, rather than making a small twit of himself! but, that's just my inner romantic coming out to play.

Ah, a wedding - I presume Lucius will be walking her down the isle... is Draco going to be a bridesmaid? lol! I can see him in a little lilac dress, wearing a tiara and holding a small bouquet! Though, if Lucius walks her down the isle, who's going to be best man? (ponders).

Harry and Ron are going to have a fit when they hear about this! lol!

A nice little chapter, have fun with the crackers!
person Utopia
schedule January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Can I PRETTY, PRETTY, PRETTY, PRETTY PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE make a request for the wedding day??

I'd love to see Lucius being ever so helpful and getting the future Mrs. Snape into her wedding dress; or helping her later in the day with a quick tidy up before the evening reception.

I'd quite like to see a quote similar to:

Lucius: "I could get you out of that corset in two minutes, but it took twenty to get you into it! Severus is going to kill me for this..."
Hermione: "Why?"
Lucius: "I tied the back in a double knot."

just a bit of random daft humour to keep Mrs-Snape-to-be calm before the dum-dum-de-dum.

PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE? I'll beg!
schedule January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter...and fic! I love it.

I don't know how you do it, I have millions of ideas floating around my head but I can't seem to make them into a good fic, but you can write like no tomorrow.

Post more soon, can't wait to read it!!
schedule January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What a great chapter, I really enjoyed this whole story so far. You are so going to have to keep me up to date on if Rickman's going to be doing the show...Im only 40 minutes from NYC, and if hes in a show so close i bet i could make it in 20 running haha
schedule January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
person Delfin
schedule January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awww that was so nice :)

i could feel their emotions somehow :')

love it, keep writing!
person Utopia
schedule January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! Alain Rickman is a Yorkshireman!!! *dances with glee* WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

Monnty Python is staple diet in our house - my Dad is permanently barking mad and would probably give your slightly OOC boys a run for their money! Lucius and Draco remind me of Andy when he first came to my house, he walked around the kitchen prodding stuff, opening cupboards, rummaging in the fridge! He still does that in my underwear drawer! I randomly find him dangling a very skimpy G-string from his finger and swishing it around saying 'ooooh'... though, I almost wet myself laughing when he walked into the bedroom wearing one of my lilac thongs!... oh dear, and I'm marrying him too, I'll ave to put my frillies under lock and key! lol! (Has Lucius seen muggle ladies underwear? I see them still in bloomers and corsets! Can you see his face if he got a look at a lady in a G-string?!)

I love Harry actions, the double exit as he saw Hermione and Snape snogging was hilarious! Lucius being told of for watching the TV was brilliant! And the pastry thing... took me a while to realise it was American Pie! (Though, as a flautist, I was horrified to hear that Miss-Band-Camp had shoved it where it most certainly shouldn't have been shoved!). Snape's reaction to that was amusing no end!

Though, I'm quite happy that they aren't watching Eastenders or Coronation Street! lol!