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for Mastering Temptation

by soldiersgirl0709

person loveeyourhatee
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great story.
can't wait for the next one!!
person poet_lover
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely loved this story. I would have reviewed sooner, but I have been ill. And I haven't had the opportunity to read the last few chapters until now. I love the Snape/Hermione pairing. I look forward to reading more of your stories in the future. Keep up the excellent work!!
person mariteri
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was fantasic! Keep up the good work. I cannot wait to read more!!!
person kmplease
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was great, love it!!
person Delfin
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh my, its over :(

i enjoyed reading this story and Im in for the next story u start writitng =)

cuz i love the Malfoys hehe ^.^
person Utopia
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

*dances crazily around room*

That was... that was... yay? What do you say when a brilliant author takes your idea and makes it her own?!

Lucius was rather proficient at doing up that corset, wasn't he? Makes me wonder how he learnt how to do that! Narcissa probably had a small army of ladies maids to get her dressed! Though, I have the image of Lucius being less than faithful, and having to re-lace the "other woman's" corset before he left her bedroom. Or perhaps his Mother instructed him on lacing corsets? Its a bit of a joke that Andy is house trained (ie. is reasonably proficient with the washing machine, iron, oven, hob, vacuum cleaner...), perhaps Lucius's Mother house-trained him in a manor that would be of use to a future pureblood wife? (And THAT little idea has a plot bunny biting! *ponders*). Evidently Draco wasn't privy to the same treatment; though he's probably more used to bras than corsets.

Harry holding the flowers! Brilliant reaction! And the lilac wouldn't actually clash with any of the lads! Lilac is a brilliant colour for blondes, many hair products for blonds are lilac so they blend in better! (but they tend to cost a small fortune!); Lilac wouldn't have clashed with the scarlet of the Weasley hair (trust me, I'm a red-head); and, of course, black goes with anything, so Harry wouldn't have clashed either!

I like how Sev complained over his formal robes; though, how is it different from his normal 'nunnish' attire that covers him completely while he's brewing potions? Perhaps the fabric is heavier, itchier (from lack of wear), a different colour? Aww... they'll soon be crumpled on the floor while Hermione ravishes her hubby.

THAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAANK-YOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOU
person Utopia
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This: http://hp.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=600014530 is all your fault! LOL!
person Narcissas Sister
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Snape Godess,
This is the first time I have reviewed anything on this site. I just had to tell you that I have read everything you have written and love it all. Hard to believe but you have made me a Lucius fan. But Severus and Remus are my personal favorites. I am also a mom and I love the dry wit of the brits. If you keep writting I'll keep reading. Hope your hubby stays safe and your kids stay fairly mellow (I don't know how you do it with three).Thanks for the stories. Keep up the good work.
person aliciana
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hello Snape-Goddess. What brilliant chapters. I must be lucky with the time difference that shows two chapters in a matter of hours. So he's made an honest woman of her and they can now shag like bunnies all over the place. The Malfoy boys were perfect as usual and I suppose Harry etc...... Sorry it's like Ally McBeal. I loved that programme when it first started but only when SHE wasn't on screen.You know what I mean. Some actors just steal the film when they are supposedly playing second fiddle to the star....Die Hard....Robin Hood:Prince of Thieves. I think you get my gist.So......you want to see young Harry in the scud as it were. My sister and I were going to go to London when Equus was on there but never got round to it. And never mind Broadway, Rickman is supposed to champion small theatres so I'm sure that the guys from the brass band in our village of Lumb wouldn't mind giving up their hall for a few nights for him to do me....sorry....perform for me, in the play Private Lives. Or we could both do selected scenes from the film Don't Look Now. I fancy going back to Venice again. Apologies to Lady of Clunn. I'm sure many German people do like Monty Python. These people in Italy were just bemused. They probably weren't even German. They were probably........... Oh Christ! I'd best not say anymore in case I get into more trouble. But we were tanked up on two bottles of champers. It was our 25th wedding anniversay. And Ms Utopia from "God's Own Country" as my Yorkshire mates call it. I'm actually a Lancastrian Scot.....but.....I do think Sev was. No....is!!!! (I'm still in denial) a Yorkshireman......possibly from Huddersfield. Wasn't that where the Amsterdam Bar was in the 70s? But I digress. Oh and Seanie (Boromir or Sharpe)Bean. I had a signed photo of him but I think my sister nicked it. My husband knew his Dad though, through the steel trade and got me one. Ms Snape-Goddess, I am looking forward to the concluding chapter(s)with both delight and sadness as this great story is coming to an end. make there wedding night one to be proud of and let them go out with a bang. Best wishes, Love Ali xxxx PS My daughter goes to Hogwarts. In a recent exam she did at Arizona State University (she's an exchange student) she got 101%. I kid you not.Only in the USA or the magical world of Rowling..........
person Gertie
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sweet angel! Everytime I check here lately there are new chapters waiting for me. And both a proposal and a wedding to boot! You are my favorite person today.