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January 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh now isn't that something draco took home a muggle... and i am sure i know why lucius left severus and hermione he knows that there is something going on.....
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January 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
nice chap... yeah they finally did it... but honestly the build up to this chap was very hot and kept you are your toes for what he was going to do next.... i had a funny feeling after he saw her dancing with draco that he feel the need to stake his claim.... great job and their first time was perfect
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January 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
so harry is going to be a rough one about this relationship and at least ginny is there to tame him down... ahhh the awkward moments when your relationship has progressed and you are unsure how to act... i bet they will have more moments in the office
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January 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
now i would love to be surprised like that every night.... very hot chap!!!! love the progress in the relationship they seem to be becoming comfortable with each other... slightly....
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January 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ohhh that was a very informative chap.... we got to see what hermione thinks of her relationship with severus and see a glimpse of what severus feels for hermione... that was very hot doing it against a wall in the dungeons... hmmmi wonder what well happen next
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January 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i loved this chap... of course there has to be a little bit of doubt i mean tthey are keeping their relationship a secret... and i love hermione and dracos friendship my best friend and i are exactly like that so i am glad to see someone write a friendship that way it is not very common but that does not mean that they have th hots for each other....
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January 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
omg geeez how lucky is she gets kissed by both malfoys and severus all we needed was remus thrown in there but that would be very hard to write... i am so glad that their plan worked but of course who knows severus better then the malfoys
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January 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yeah that was really hot.... i can not believe he was looking in her or dracos mind and found out that they napped together... but then again it does not surprise me.... yeahhh she told him that she loved him...
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January 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
nice chap... wow severus is felling some jealousy!!!!! thats funny but hermione is awful close to the malfoys... i love that she called lucius thor how funny is that... and her gryffindor stuff turns to slytherin in their house... that is so funny i liked this little peak into hermiones relationship with her friends... i can not waitto see them in a muggle nightclub
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January 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ha ha omg she was sitting on dracos back.. shit that is hysterical... i can just imagine what they looked like hence severus' heated look!!!!