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for Mastering Temptation

by soldiersgirl0709

person areader
schedule December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I need to let you know, following my earlier review, that I read your story and like it very much. Even though I know I may sound grumpy about the Americanisms, I really do like the way your story builds and what is a very different relationship between the Snape and Hermione than we usually read.
person aliciana
schedule December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi there. I'm really enjoying this and of course a demanding, controlling Sev is a very sexy one. Not that Hermione isn't either. Oh and the Malfoy boys too. Hell......what a delightful menage a quatre that would be. Well done, Best wishes, Love Ali xxxxx.
person Jen618
schedule December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh this story sounds like it will be a fun romp. Not canon, but fun! Thanks!
person DB1
schedule December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
@11 hot story. update soon

*DB*
person Gertie
schedule December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please, please, please write more soon! I desperately need to know what happens and you always write the best stories. I love your work.
person Delfin
schedule December 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg u rock! another chappie =D

the teasing was hot ^.^

person little old me
schedule December 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
thanks for the update! I really love this story! and I'm really happy that I won't have to fear a lack of good stories in the future... but now you got me wondering what the new pairing will be...exciting news...anyways, if you write it, it's going to be great! I hope you enjoy the new job and it doesn't add to your stress!
schedule December 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yay I love your stories... and this one especially
person chyara
schedule December 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great story! Hope you update soon.
person Madietta
schedule December 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I was glad to discover a little something from your quill again. I like your stories very much, you write very easily and it's refreshing to read such... I guess I would say good, old-fashioned romance, and I don't mean it in the least derogatory way, either. I don't mind the AU aspect at all, any fanfiction is essentially AU after all, it's only a matter of how far you are willing to go. As long as you keep the characters in character, which you do wonderfully, fine with me.

I admit that the D/S type of sexual relationship that you obviously like to explore makes me a little uneasy when reading about it, since I was once in that type of relationship and it gradually morphed into something unpleasantly abusive. That is not to say it is badly written, just that it makes it a little more difficult for me to identify with such a type of sexual interaction. I still enjoy reading it, though. Thanks for sharing something which lights up my long work hours at the computer.