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for Mastering Temptation

by soldiersgirl0709

person little old me
schedule January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
now that was fun, wouldn't mind that myself!
Please don't laugh at me as I have only ever seen it in my mother language, but was that a Batman quote?
schedule January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh I loved this chapter. It was funny to see both Lucius and Draco ganging up on Hermione just to annoy Severus. I liked it. I'm happy that u have fast updates, Thanks!!! Until the next chapter...
schedule January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Happy dance....Go Severus.........big doppy grin on face.
Fab Chapter...
schedule January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
person mariteri
schedule January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was great! I loved him showing up as he did and the Malfoys playing with his jealous nature. The way you did it was perfect, as you avoided the cliche it could have easily have become. Oh yeah, thanks for the shout out. Keep up the excellent work and update when you can.
schedule January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oops...lol...trying that again.

Try this it works.

< i > this < / i > it works

with no spaces.

Red
person Utopia
schedule January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HTML code for italics, bold and underline - just remove the spaces.

< i > text text text < / i > text
< b > text text text < / b > text
< u > text text text < / u > text

Hope this helps!
xxx
person Delfin
schedule January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
mwahaha I knew he would show up :D

amazing really :)

and yeah what a way to start the new year for Hermione hahaha :)
schedule January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, but the Malfoy men are gorgeous ... but the dark mysterious Severus is the only one I'd want. I think Sev is going to have to work harder at mastering Temptation!
person Delfin
schedule January 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hehehe everybody is over hermione ^.^

and Sev stealing hermione for a quickie hehe :P

nice!