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December 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A-M-A-Z-I-N-G
i cant find other words for this!!!!
Love it. Please continue :)
Jocy
i cant find other words for this!!!!
Love it. Please continue :)
Jocy
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December 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i have to say i'm really enjoying your story. it's been a while since i've read HP fic & Hermoine/Lupin is a new 'ship for me to read. you are a very good writer & i thank you for sharing your story. it's not easy to find good fanfic writers these days.
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December 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The story is going well, but I do have to add that it was slightly predictable. That's not to discount the quality of the work in anyway, but you might want to keep an eye out for keeping telling details out of previous chapters in the future. Good job and please update soon.
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December 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Though I hope Ron won't get off to easily, I do like how you made this last three chapters (20-22), you solved the situation splendidly! I look forward for your next updates!!!
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December 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great chapter, the smexiness was excellent. loved this line "She stood there and listened as each lock was turned slowly, her heart aching with each click. " AWWW I'm REALLY looking forward to the next chapter!
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December 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Once again, wonderful job! I can't wait to see the confrontation with Ron that you hinted at in chapter 19. Oh, and of course, the smut was superb! I wish I could write smut half as well as you do.
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December 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ohh it's been good so far and I foresee it getting better, for us the readers, not Ron. In fact, my little brian just shuddered with Ron facing an enraged werewolf as he stupidly tries to force Hermione into something. He won't stand a chance. Do I hear good-bye Ronald? I'll just have to wait to find out but it's made me think - is he dying, just scared and scarred or just humiliated beyond belief? I can't wait. When's the next chapter(s) up? My email, if you have a notice list, is never_tempt@yahoo.com. Thanks for a wonderful story!
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December 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story! For some reason I really enjoy reading fics where Ron is a sexually inadequate idiot, and Remus or Sirius show Hermione a better way! I love all the little bits with Harry and Ginny cheekily winding the Lupins as well, and when "the Lupins" first realise that they enjoy being just that. Looking forward to seeing what lies ahead, keep up the fantastic work!
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December 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh how evil you are! Cliffhangers like that is not nice!!! The only way you can make up for it is to make Hermione kick Ron's ares to kingdom come, preferabley also making it public what a git he is!!! I hope you don't intend for Ron to go to the Lupin's house where Lupin will be in the basement? The werewolf would be able to smell Ron. Though I have no trouble with Remus as a werewolf getting hold of Ron and have him as a evening snack, I kind of like that idea, I know Remus would not be able to live with himself afterwards if he did something like that.
I am quite hellbent on that it is Hermione who must make it clear to Ron that he is a idiot, a looser, and that he will never have her back. It doesn't seem to get into his mind when anyone else tells him, so some well chosen words from Hermione would probably be more effective. (And don't you dare letting Ron sexually assoult her, first of all I hate it when violaters sucseed, but love it when they are twarted, seccond, Ron doesn't deserve to ever lay a hand on her ever again).
Update again soon, very soon!!!!
I am quite hellbent on that it is Hermione who must make it clear to Ron that he is a idiot, a looser, and that he will never have her back. It doesn't seem to get into his mind when anyone else tells him, so some well chosen words from Hermione would probably be more effective. (And don't you dare letting Ron sexually assoult her, first of all I hate it when violaters sucseed, but love it when they are twarted, seccond, Ron doesn't deserve to ever lay a hand on her ever again).
Update again soon, very soon!!!!
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December 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooh...what is going to do? Please update soon!