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for A New Family For Harry

by shadygrl

schedule October 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I Love the story. But I'm wondering when you'll update and or finish it.
person LeeOnami
schedule September 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I've been hoping this wasn't going to be a dead fic, I check back every now and again. I love everything about it, even the Severus and Narcissa subplot relationship. really, I was dancing on the ceilings when there was an update and sad when i finished it. I hope you keep on writing this lovely fic, there's far too few good ones out there.
schedule August 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad you haven't given up on the story. Hope to see more soon.
person Tytianna
schedule August 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great story!
person Yocum1219
schedule July 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story has definitely gotten my attention. I'm actually impressed that you're making them wait....and it'll end up (hopefully) a relationship. It's been very well written. Please add me to your update list.

Yocum1219@yahoo.com
person Blood Lust 777
schedule June 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*claps hands in excited manner* want more, want more! Please update again!
schedule June 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, this is just amazing. I will admit I read the whole thing in one evening (but not one sitting), and I just could not stop. Your description and use of the English language is wonderful, and the characterizations are perfect. I love the direction this is going, with the subtle changes, even though I do not normally like this type of situation. The suspense leads to a perfect balance of tensions, and I cannot wait to see where this goes.

If it's not too much trouble would you mind addding me to the update list? Thank you very much, I am cvhern@nycap.rr.com. I hope there's more soon!
schedule June 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just came across this story today, so I haven't had to endure the waiting for new installments like everyone else, but I am curious as to what will happen next. This is a bit different from the "The Malfoys adopt Harry" stories I usually come across, which is mightily refreshing. I was wondering if I may join this mailing list for updates? My email is angelikdemons@hotmail.com.
person Zelphie
schedule May 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
<3 <3 Lovely chapter. I feel like I'm being strung along by a heartless vixen. :P
You know, when I stumbled upon this story, I was actually just looking for a PWP without love or much sentiment; a quick 'wham, bam, thank you, sir,' if you will. :P (Those seem so hard to find! It's mate this and mate that, everywhere.) But I was very pleasantly surprised by your story. I don't mind waiting for it in your story because there is the promise of fulfillment. Thus far, this story has been very amiably teasing. :3

I wanted to point out in an earlier review that, as Lucius is educated and cultured, he might not end his sentences w/ prepositions. I haven't noticed it in this chapter, however.
person Zelphie
schedule May 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
All chapters I have read have thus far been very nicely done, and this one was especially titillating. :3