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for A New Family For Harry

by shadygrl

person berkie88
schedule May 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for you to continue! I hope Harry will meet Dumbledore soon! Will Harry be warned about him? Will Dumbledore try to interfere?
Not to mention it can't be too long until they have to prepare for Hogwarts... I wonder who will take the seperation harder...

Can you add me to the update list? My e-mail is berkie_88@yahoo.com
Hope you'll continue soon!
person ulla
schedule March 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Omigod! I can't believe how much you've written! I'm always bookmarking compelling stories and boy am I glad I clicked on this one again! Everything is so well written; Harry's birthday party and Harry asks for another kiss, or when poor Draco gets all jealous of Ron for taking his Harry (too cute!) and get's his reward for playing nice through smooches, OH! Or of course when Harry is off tempting Snape, wicked child!.

I especially like how you write Harry to be extremely calculating and mature (sometimes) and not some hapless child. And how Lucius learns how to deal with his certain urges. Their little mini vacation is quite sweet so far, can't wait for more.

But man do I love reading spoiled!Draco, and yes he is often part of the side between the character development of both Harry and Lucius, but c'mon he must be so much fun to write because he's a joy to read.

Anyway keep up the fantastic work!
person Skylab01
schedule February 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
cool story
schedule January 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Sooooo need chapter 23!!! A triad!!!! Both Malfoys and Harry!!! I love those!!! Please email me when you update!!!!
person darkwind3
schedule December 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is yummy naughty :P I check for updates everyday :) Thank you for writing it.
person darkwind3
schedule December 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'd love to know when you update this story! It's great!
person anniea
schedule November 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
more more more more more!!!!!!!!!!!!! i stopped reading this and i don't know why but i started to reread it. but i like it. update soon *kisses*
person jadedkitten
schedule October 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Since English is obviously not your first language, plz get a beta who's it is because the grammar is srsly distracting.
person darkwish3
schedule October 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is so good so far i can't wait to see what comes next! thank you for writing it
schedule October 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Really enjoying your writing, looking forward to the next chapter!